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Guest chapter 6 . 4/14/2017 Awesome chapter, next one you should have hiccups friends pay Francis a visit about his hacking Harrison files. |
Thatgey chapter 6 . 4/14/2017 This is awsome keep up the good work please :) |
skyred89 chapter 6 . 4/14/2017 nice chapter |
Checkingdude chapter 5 . 2/28/2017 You could use a beta. Your story is suffering from these small mistakes that would literally take a few seconds to correct. Just things like capitalization, comas, a few spelling errors, and separation of speakers. |
SoMeOnEnEw8 chapter 1 . 2/28/2017 PUT MODERN AU AT BEGINING |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2017 Gooood start! |
interestingchair chapter 1 . 2/8/2017 very nice story, interesting chair aproves **** |
EagleDragon15 chapter 1 . 2/9/2017 Great story, grammar and spelling are kinda horrible though lol |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2017 I think its an awesome story adn would love to see it carry on |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2017 This is interesting, and good. Please keep going. |
ChevalierRadiant chapter 3 . 1/22/2017 So mysterious. I love it |
theskrillrider chapter 3 . 1/22/2017 good story like there jobs keep it up |
Wustenfuchs chapter 3 . 1/22/2017 Good so far |
BrawlerGamer chapter 3 . 1/22/2017 Well it's no surprise that Harrison is the son of a very important man. (Like most modern adaptations of Stoick is) and is Astrid's mentor actually Harrison's mother? |
Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 2 . 12/25/2016 This is good:) |