Reviews for Who is His Family?
Guest chapter 6 . 4/14/2017
Awesome chapter, next one you should have hiccups friends pay Francis a visit about his hacking Harrison files.
Thatgey chapter 6 . 4/14/2017
This is awsome keep up the good work please :)
skyred89 chapter 6 . 4/14/2017
nice chapter
Checkingdude chapter 5 . 2/28/2017
You could use a beta. Your story is suffering from these small mistakes that would literally take a few seconds to correct. Just things like capitalization, comas, a few spelling errors, and separation of speakers.
SoMeOnEnEw8 chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
PUT MODERN AU AT BEGINING
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2017
Gooood start!
interestingchair chapter 1 . 2/8/2017
very nice story,

interesting chair aproves
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EagleDragon15 chapter 1 . 2/9/2017
Great story, grammar and spelling are kinda horrible though lol
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
I think its an awesome story adn would love to see it carry on
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
This is interesting, and good. Please keep going.
ChevalierRadiant chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
So mysterious. I love it
theskrillrider chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
good story like there jobs keep it up
Wustenfuchs chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
Good so far
BrawlerGamer chapter 3 . 1/22/2017
Well it's no surprise that Harrison is the son of a very important man. (Like most modern adaptations of Stoick is) and is Astrid's mentor actually Harrison's mother?
Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
This is good:)
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