Reviews for Praeclarus Anguis
Jasmine Julia Soleo Bias chapter 4 . 6/21/2019
May I just say that the mirror of eriseD was wrongly spelled in this chapter. Just saying...
AlexBrin13 chapter 33 . 4/29/2019
Tip:
It's spelled Hermione. The I is before the O.
AlexBrin13 chapter 28 . 4/29/2019
Tip:
It's not Animorphmagus, it's Animagus. You're getting it mixed up with Metamorphagus. Animagus is someone who can turn into the animal that best defines them. Metamorphagi are those who are born with the ability to change their physical features (hair, skin, nose, etc).
Novarkek chapter 45 . 4/18/2019
So, so good. This story is fantastic. Loved it. Just hope the sequels don't squash my love. I hate sad or tragical endings. Hope neither of them dies later. All the best the wishes to complete the series.
Taylor Dixon Ivashkov chapter 35 . 12/16/2018
Fun fact: when this chapter came up my phone glitched and so I read the title as “The Slag Club” Im not sure if I’m proud or disappointed of myself
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 45 . 2/12/2018
Amusing. Harry, while Tom thinks that Tom is pretending to be in love with Harry, I think that Tom is already, if not in love, then at least having a crush on Harry. Because everything Tom listed - Harry being powerful, intriguing, independent, butting heads with Tom, pushing Tom's buttons, unafraid to discuss facts and opinions with Tom - counts as part of falling in love. And Harry, while far more reserved - Harry doesn't even think that he lusts after Tom; Harry both likes Tom's genius, snark, ambition, and fears possibility of insanity and destruction - is also coming to worry for Tom, and possibly to love him.
Mr Riddle, in Chapter 30... Did Dumbledore forget that Tom goes by Gaunt, these days?
Chapter 35, same matter. "Not does Tom Gaunt.", not Riddle.
If Tom is used as bait by Bellatrix, then why aren't members of DA caught by Death Eaters?
On one hand, I am sad that Tom will not be with Harry at Dursleys - but Ron and Hermione might be sufficient, unless Dursleys go on full-scale assault. On another hand, if Tom was here, he would have likely either killed the Dursleys, or been destroyed by their cruelty. Unless he had something else to occupy his time with.
Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.
monstermadcat chapter 7 . 1/27/2018
despite being an American I love the jab at our Congress
Iulim Nozerdof chapter 1 . 10/11/2017
I've read 1000 fanfiction and have boriced many a pattern bout this is one of the rare few I haven't seen/discovered so I like it. Thank You
Guest chapter 45 . 10/7/2017
Love this story. Hope the second part comes soon
Forbidden Moons chapter 45 . 9/23/2017
This is one of the best stories in the HP fandom I've ever read.
majitzu chapter 45 . 8/27/2017
This was a really great fanfic. I love Tom, and I love how Harry's friendsaccept their relationship without problems (except for ginny).I hope there will be a continuation in the future. Thanks for writing :)
Scaranpannoir chapter 45 . 8/11/2017
Will there be a part 2? The summary certainly suggest so, and the ending is a bit open ended, so will there? Or it already exists but I can't find it..? Whichever, this was a fun ride! I love it! I wonder what'll happen if Tom meets Voldie... it'll be like a me against my inner demons, I'll bet XD
Scaranpannoir chapter 42 . 8/11/2017
I thought NEWTs are supposed to be in their seventh year, not sixth
Scaranpannoir chapter 27 . 8/10/2017
You should check the names, they're missing in some places.
Grania chapter 44 . 8/2/2017
Of course the locket isn't a Founder's item! Tom gave Harry the real one! It makes absolutely no sense that they planned and went on an entire mission to retrieve it when Harry had it the entire time! Duh! What were they expecting?
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