I love it! I love it! I totally love it! This is my first newmione fic I ever read. Yes it's close to the original play but I like the way you can alter it and put Hermione perfectly in the story. thank you for made Hermione so awesome she deserves it.

It was really a good and interesting story and perfect how you incorporated Hermione in there so flawlessly the magic between them were really sweet and I realky screamed like gosh kiss already dammit and they did, I just recently watched the movies on DVD never got to watch it on cinema and time really goes by. I really could see the scenes with Hermione and she hits Grindlewald best scenes ever. I will of course read the sequel too. *cookies for inspiration on more stories and the good work*

Awww I hope this is much more than a retelling of the films with Hermione added into scenes. It’s also a lot lacking cause it’s pretty hard to visualize what’s going on unless you’ve the movie stamped onto your brain and you’re just using these as a guide for what part of the movie you’re at. Still, will read more and hope this develops beyond what’s in the films exactly

I LOVED THIS STORY! I don't think I've ever read anything so quickly! Can't wait for what's next. You're an amazing author and an incredible story teller. I've been enraptured with every word. Thank you.

This is an awesome story I can't wait for the next story 3

I really enjoyed this! I've read it in one seating and was thoroughly thrilled! Off to read the sequel now.

Thank you for writing!

your work is fantastic, I like the tension between Hernione and Newt, they're very cute.

I really, really want to like this fic. I really want to finish it too, but the odd use of tenses and basic grammar is making me annoyed. This reads more like a script which is difficult to get into as a story. If you need a beta, I'd be happy to offer my services.

It is a great concept for a plot and something quite original. I was excited to see the paring because I have read my fill of the "usual" ones. It is refreshing to see writers branch off. Unfortunately I will have to leave this fic unfinished.

I really really really really really really love this :) especially since it gave me ideas on Newt & Hermione stories for me :) it's still a working progress though but, as i said slow very slow working progress.

I don't know if maybe it's been too long since I last read this but I feel like there are some tweaks and changes you've made with your story and I love them. I vaguely remember Hermione "stealing the show" so to speak, this time it seems like everyone is getting their chance to be the hero or at least a bigger part of it all. Phenomenal writing

Going through with a reread since it's been a while, I'm still loving your doc just as much though. For a first it's really good :D I would think you were a seasoned writer of fanfiction if you didn't say otherwise.

Just let me know when everything is good to go so I can reread the story!

I was flabbergasted by Queenie switching sides. I left the cinema completely shocked. But that evening there was a very good screenplay documentary about the rise of Hitler. I think that if Grindelwald was there in one of the gatherings, quietly observing - he would have been able to convince Queenie to follow him. Showing him the feverish mob rallied up by a madman. Queenie being Jewish would have been a prime target and this Kowalski fellow - he would have been considered in-german too.

I am so pumped! I’m so glad you’re picking it up again! I’ll be here to read your masterpiece weather you decide to restart or edit or whatever you want to do! I look forward to it!

You know, if you decide to edit your chapters or re-write some stuff, I will still be here every step of the way. I need this fic and I need this ship.