Great story! Well done!

And at least Bruce wont be board... should be bored.

I love the premise of this story, cant wait to read it all

Hahaha loved the ending

Uh oh I smell trouble coming up with that test

Hholy shit I love this first chapter, wished we had seen a lkttle bit more of the Matthas friendship though, they seemed so lovely together.

I left a guest review not sure if it got through, hadnt been on the site in a while and forgot to login, but there is a typo... small thing but read that you went through the story several times.

At least bruce wouldnt be board... should be bored.

Its when they first drive to the farm to play together.

OMG I love this entire thing. this legitimately reads like a good, in character, well made JL pilot episode of a tv series. If not it’s own movie! 10/10 loved the entire thing. Especially how you did the fight scenes. I could nearly see it playing out in front of me! Absolutely amazing writing, well done.

Absolutely loved this fanfiction

Loved it! Nice recreation, of The Superman mytho. Using just enough background to make the story you're own. Taking elements of all origins and bending it to your will. Thus creating your own 'original story'. You did a fantastic job. Feel free to continue in the same vein. You have a reader for life...

Better than the movie

Bruce smiling he's suppose to be serious he's BATMAN!

awesome ending

Eh, well Lex should get executed for this, and really Kara has like the most powerful political immunity in the galaxy. But seriously Lex needs to die his deception of Kara could of caused so much more damage by enraging her.

awesome

Final word on my prior review - If you don’t particularly mention how Clark gets around, then my guess is that he walks or flies.
LOL, wondered if Clark beat him up. Well, kinda! “Indeed” and “had” seem to be your favorite words. Nice reference to the movie, with the “fell down a well” excuse. Best “no to sex” discussion I’ve ever read or seen in Supey stories. Seems Joker lucked out in the elevator! At least Lois gets a good dig in on him. You said Clark was going to spend the day in Smallville but he’s back at work before lunch? I see what you did there, with Supes and the Batsignal. Cute. I was surprised that Bruce said what he did to Lucy, but it makes logical sense.
All right, time for some butt kickin!

awesome