Reviews for Veil of War
WhiteElfElder chapter 24 . 7/19/2017
This was a great adventure getting two of my favorite universes together. I never figured out of the RWBY verse had prosthetic up for the level of replacing eyes.
The Dude Strikes Back chapter 22 . 7/17/2017
Hey I really enjoyed your last Fic and as much as I tried I couldn't really get into this one (not because it's bad but because Harry Potter's never really been my cup of tea fanfic wise) So will you be continuing stories with Ruby,Merc and Emerald? or will you be doing another story

Thanks!
Dragon Lord Draco chapter 23 . 7/17/2017
What about his meeting with professors? Also when is the next book?
WhiteElfElder chapter 23 . 7/17/2017
Somehow I get the feeling that those items are not done with Harry.
Thermidor606 chapter 22 . 7/12/2017
This has been a great read.
Dear Crazy Emi chapter 22 . 7/5/2017
great work.
Dragon Lord Draco chapter 22 . 7/3/2017
I thought that Imperius was used but honestly I liked the length anyway great work I can't wait to see what the next book is
cornholio4 chapter 22 . 7/3/2017
Will the hp side show the fate of fudge
WhiteElfElder chapter 22 . 7/3/2017
How will Talaria be able to go back, was she hiding somewhere and jump on at the last moment? Harry made his full transition, too bad it had to be used to kill.
WhiteElfElder chapter 21 . 6/25/2017
That was too easily dealt with; the better get Harry checked over by Mercury to be sure.
Gojin1990 chapter 11 . 6/12/2017
i think cedric still dying proves how they weren't ready, but this gives cedric a better showing. rather then he simply gets cursed and dead.
WhiteElfElder chapter 20 . 6/11/2017
The way RWBY have changed is going to drastically alter that plan for Cinder and Salem. The problem I have is that Cinder does not realize she has a short life expectancy if Salem has her way.
Gojin1990 chapter 6 . 6/10/2017
please tell me harry will get a semblance or something eventually? although at times it seems like harry is just a side character ? :O your not turning poor harry into a 5th...9th? wheel are you?
Gojin1990 chapter 1 . 6/9/2017
thank you for putting that warning in there. i THOUGHT it might be a sequel but i wasnt 100% sure. it seemed to mention things that happened before now. i already like this story in either case :D
RWBYHarryPotterFan1 chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
This was so good!
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