Okey this was sweet and awesome at the same time

Superb

yes

Great story, I love Suicune. Curious if you made that song yourself, of if it's Original?

I skipped I skimmed. Nice idea but it lacks something. Keep trying I see potential here.

AGAIN. God Damn.

Your stories never cease to amaze me. The perfect choice of words, scenes and appearance descriptions, and songs, just fascinating. I am really looking forward to reading more incredible stories from you. This is CL, over and out

Never put song lyrics into a story.

This was easily one of the most thrilling and action-packed stories I have ever read! I loved the whole story, and Zeke seemed a real character and real person. You described everything so vividly, I could see it and even smell it.

I liked how Suicune seemed old and wise, but also had a youthful spark to her, and a delight at finally finding someone she connected with. The bit with the song, and them singing and dancing to it was cute, and seemed so real and not at all out of place.

The raid on Team Shadow's base was very nerve-wracking, and I dare say, was rather scary for how real it was. I could almost smell the gunpowder and hear the gunfire.
I loved the battle with the attack helicopter, and Suicune freezing it was pure genius!

I also thought the love scene was spicy, but also had a sweet, tender quality to it. Very well done.

I think Team Shadow were excellent villains, and would be good to use again in another story where you need a villain, as they were infinitely more scary than Team Rocket, who are just a joke.;)

I look forward to the next story.