can you make a sequal saying how mary margret is on her period and she needs emma to help her. During that time the discussion topic goes onto the birds and the bees. PLEASE I LOVE YOUr MOMMA BEAR TALKS WITH EMMA.

Awesome work. Love how you brought in Regina and Elsa.

Oh my gosh - I love the whole new instalment

It was so dramatic but still full of fluff and great times / I like the up and downs with Emma her new brother and her parents / the way you brought in Ingrid and Helga being Emma's mom and Nesl being Emma's biological half brother was brilliant

I am so sorry for her when she was trapped on the closet in her school, when no one let her in - I am so thankful that our schools here in Austria are quite safe, that we don't have that easy law guns - that not anybody is allowed to have guns at home and of they are at home that they have to be in a safe no one has access too except the one with the license

I would have loved to see David giving in on Emma getting a driver's license (that is another thing which is quite crazy for me - that teenagers are allowed to drive cars, here you have to be 18 to do so alone)

I love how they adopted Neal in the end - I was so worried that something might happen to Neal before the Nolans were able to adopt him

I love the whole brother/sister bonding - Emma making him a blanket?! How sweet was this?!

I am so sorry for Lily that Mal and Marvin (I don't know if you did it on purpose but putting a dragon together with a fish is quite funny ) split up; I hoped Emma tell the truth about hiding Lily in her room, I bet David would not let her down and just called Nal to tell her Lily is here safe and would not have given Emma away...

Emma cutting herself is a pretty intense way to express her feelings but I really like how you constantly stuck to her past, her issues and struggles and her way of recovery

There again I have to admit that putting Emma and Baelfire together was such a great idea - they are in such harmony and such a great team and helping each other and understanding each other; I cannot believe I say that but: Thank you for showing us that an intense friendship like theirs can lead to such an understanding and natural love

In this part I also love how MM struggles with being VP, mum of a teenager and mum of a baby (btw: great that Belle has Gideon st the same time, so he and Neal always have a play buddy and friend)

Thank you again for writing and creating this wonderful universe, thank you for continuing and updating and sharing your wonderful thoughts with us!

So I only just saw that you had wrote the last chapter of this.
I hate you.
I'm literally crying. It's 5am and there are tears rolling down my face because you wrote such a beautiful last chapter- I love how you set up the new roommates and Neal's adoption, the graduation (my high school was very different we got a slide show and kicked out the back door - no parents). I'm just so, so proud of Emma and how far she came in this story.
The thing which really got me was the inserts from the first fic, especially at the end, the bit with David telling Mary to keep an open mind.
In summary: I both hate and love you and I'm an emotional mess.

I can't wait! I am happy she found two girls to befriend while in college. That is the scariest part about leaving home. I hope she keeps in touch with Lily and Mal and Bae as well! I can just see Emma, Lily, Ruby, Regina, and Elsa all hanging out together! Thanks for sharing this with us!

Awwww I love how you ended this part. That was great! Can't wait for the next one

loved it! :) I hope the story continues soon!

I think there were some onions around too while I was reading this haha! This was such a great story! I can't wait for the next one! :)

So. Much. Emotion! Thank you so much for this amazing story and all the effort you put into it!

God! yeah totally a bunch of onions here too.
This is one of my fave chapters definitely! So many feels! I kind of feel things rushed a little because there are a lot of things I would like to read like bae graduation and talking about college and all that; Mary and david freaking out about Emma leaving; the classic girl's going to college talk; etc. but I know the story has to move forward and I am happy and anxious but at the same time sad beacuse it's another chapter closed and this amazing story will come to an end (hope not soon please). As always love your story anxiously waiting for updates!

aaaahhhhh... I cried so much reading this. :(
Such a beautiful ending for this story.
Can't wait to read the next one.

aww so sweet, same didnt cry at all. Love this, great wrap up for this part of their story. and can't wait for the next installment of this, and the one-shots. as usual great writing, huge fan of yours.

I'm excited to see what's next for this story! Hopefully Henry will be making an appearance soon ;)! Love that you made Regina and Elsa her roommates!

I don't think they are being too harsh. Emma can't run off like that but I am glad they understand why she did it and it wasn't running away or done maliciously.

Such a great chapter! Can't wait til the next one!