Yes! I’m so glad you are updating this again. This is legit one of my favorite parts of the year, waiting for this story to be updated lmao. This was a lovely chapter as always and I really hope we can get to the Hebijo Girl’s this time around.

awwww cute

Please update

I would love to see a Fubuki chapter after the four major teams. She has twice the amount of shit with being a shinobi who's part youma. Waifu needs some love.

awww so cute!

Please, remember to try doing both Ryoubi and Ryouna, at the same time, next Christmas! So, you could do both the sadist and the masochist! Please, promise us you'll do that! I'd love to see how their Christmas turns out next year!

Perfect! I like it a lot, and i would have like it even more if a part of Yumi pregnat where in epilogue, but i like a lot the weding. Thanks for the chapter, i will be waiting the next one.

You should try doing both Ryoubi and Ryouna, at the same time! So, you could do both the sadist and the masochist!

Yes! I've been waiting for the Mirai chapter for a while now and here it is! I did read it when you uploaded it, but never got around to reviewing it.

Anyway, just like with the other chapters I loved this one as well. It seems like you based this one around Mirai's statue which is kinda a good point to focus on, even if it's obvious in a way, which is the source of her issues and self-esteem. I do feel kinda bad for her as well because mistake her for a child, despite being a teenager herself.

Also for the thugs that assume the Reader was luring Miria... could they not assume Mirai could've been a younger sister instead? Well it wouldn't have driven the narrative to the point where Mirai needed to vent and let out her emotions. Not to mention reveal her Shinobi Transformation to the Reader.

I like the idea we can say whatever words we want in our head with how you setup your story. Very neat concept you don't see in a lot of Reader stories is yours is my favorite because of your writing style for that very reason.

The relationship between Mirai is short, but sweet. Though my only complaint is that I wish we saw more of how they got together or had more good times together, before things got bad. Though WHY was the cops called in at the cafe after Mirai shouted? Again with the thug thing couldn't the Reader explained she could be his little sister or something? Or Mirai showing ID that's she's a TEENAGER.

Some things that threw me off and confused me a bit. I wish you added more like the store manager thought you were suspicious or something that he called the cops instead of having the cops out there. Seemed rushed. But nothing too concerning.

And once again the Epilogue is another great addition. I really loved it. I can totally see Mirai mature to that adult form and seems perfect for her. Also her parenting is so on-point I loved every bit of it, what a great mother. I wonder what Auntie Homura thinks of it.

I've already read the Haruka and Yumi chapters, but I'll give my thoughts all the same. Don't know if you answered my question from before or if I even asked it, but will you end this story with a Harem Ending (Katsuragi doesn't count) for all the girls happily get the same Reader?

Until next time, this is VirusChris signing off! Sayonara my Nakama! Laters!

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awwwm so cute, and fitting considering the month is december

oh man, Haruka's wild!

Good! I am waiting to for Yumi! She is my favorite girl from Gessen. Then it will come Miyabi, once you finish whit the other girls of Gessen, i was wondering if you could do this type of One Shots for other girls from different animes? For example for Selvaria Bless, and Brunhildr from Valkyrie Chronycles. Thanks for the new chapter, see you in the next one.

KO awesome chapter, all the girls are great in this story and hope to see more awesomeness soon!

cute and Haruka is next? oh boy this will be fun