I love this story and I would love to see how Harry Potter would affect the 5th Grail War in the "Fate" dimension from which he left but huh, didn't you wrote that after his fight against the "Crimson Moon", Zelretch could no longer access dimensions where he didn't existed or was too different from his original self?

So why Zelretch could send Harry and Sakura to Harry's original dimension? Also, wouldn't it be funnier for the "vampire troll" to send the children to a dimension where the wizards and the Magi exist in the same world?

so she was raped and he didint torture shinji

Still loving this story.

Oh my... wow... Im just... Like... I honestly have never been more impressed or emotionally destroyed by a fanfic

"inn cum bar"? is that a thing or is this misspelled?

A shame there's no more

:)

Don't Crest Worms eat the bone marrow of males, shortening the lifespan of males to just a few years? And wasn't Kariya disfigured when implanted with them? Harry is much younger, so the damage would likely be several times worse...

This is one of the best magic worlds that i read in a harry potter fanfiction
It is the first time that i read this big change in the magic world
Please keep writing this story i and more people love it.

One thing, i thing that harry and sakura could makje friends of luna lovegood when she started her first year (in the second year of harry).

I certanly liked your story and the hufflepuff idea, i liked how you made the fic quite dark orienated without becomeing an horror fic, and how capable harry is without making him a Gary stue.
Please update soon

I'm honestly disappointed. It started out nice but veered towards the Cliché Road later.

Dropped.

Phenomenal story, you've done a great job writing from both dimensions as well as making Dumbledore a character with legitimacy as another human

The conversation with Tonks was a little too awkward and stilted for my tastes, but it's a small issue.

I think this is an interesting story but i don't really think Harry's attitude really reflects what he's been through. I get him being angry. I accept him being protective over Sakura. I don't buy him being as overly intelligent, nor as randomly good at combat as youve made him. And making him belligerent over everything while also being super headstrong just doesn't fit after what he's been through. It's just kinda killing the imersion.

Why would Harry even know how to fight? The majority of the two and a half years he spent in the Fate universe was spent in the worm pit. The rest of the time was spent studying. And he definitely didn't learn before he went to the fate universe.