I love Gladion! He may be super emo and edgy, but I for some reason I like that about him. This was super well written :)

Ha! I haven't even read the story yet, but your Author's Note cracked me up! AN's where I can see what the author is like are my favorite, I really feel like I'm interacting with you! Please, never change your Notes! XD But anyway, I'm sure the story will be great! :)
Later That Reading...
Ah, good story! I was right, I did like it! :)

That was so cute! I finished the game a couple days ago, and I love the idea of pairing the main (female) playable character with Gladion. Great work on this!

The writing quality is fine and dandy, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader and replace them all with a canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. Alternatively, you can move it to a site where it's allowed like Archive Of Our Own or deviantART.

Would somebody tell me why so many rule-breakers are popping out like weeds in spring lately? And why so many are too dumb to read rules that are *right in front of them*? I'll save ya the trouble of going back to your profile to read 'em, and just post 'em verbatim here: Entries not allowed:
1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Note what rule 5 says. Then take this down. It has been reported regardless.