This story is so amazing so far. Please continue it!

Aw...how cute. Simon entrusting his son with the jewel. With that said, I bet that child will be named after the jewel itself.

Would like to see more on what happens next. I bet the story details will be really juicy.

Dawww... I can see potential towards Daddy Simon. He so cute. Write more, you scrub.

Um… why does Blackquill seem to sound like an old pirate at the beginning of this chapter?

Awww... it's really a joy reading this entry of Sylv. Was afraid they'll say, "Look son, we tried... we ended up using contraceptives."

Anyway, can't wait to see this story develop some more.

Now I wanna see the Justice family. :(

GG, Sylvester's going to be like Aunt Aura.

I'd read this a while ago, but too busy to review. Still busy here, but... here's my review.

Do more Cykesquill, scrub.

I'm really enjoying this story so far! You've accurately managed to portray the viewpoint of a young character, and effectively contrasted it to their older viewpoint and understanding of the world. I'm already sympathising with Sylvester as a character, and it's refreshing to see correct grammar on this website for once. Your dialogue flows well between characters and I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue this in the lead up to the first court case. My only slight criticism is your overuse of the ellpise in the last paragraph, but other than that, well done!