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raelarial1 chapter 11 . 7/30 Cloud's motorcycle is the Fenrir |
hallowmask123 chapter 69 . 7/28 Okay finished and caught up to date with the story so here is my number 1 question where is kushinas in all this she was mentioned briefly in the beginning but not a single thing about her since we have seen minato multiple time so what gives. I feel you are doing too many crossovers at once and honestly I skipped reading all of the moana chapters cause that was too much for me. |
Blaze1992 chapter 69 . 7/17 Well honestly that was both depressing and sweet I think. |
Blaze1992 chapter 67 . 7/17 For a sec there I thought they were going to kiss him. |
Blaze1992 chapter 66 . 7/16 . . . I wanna hear more about this reaper-"killer" but umm I am confused does that omake mean Kushina was R*ped by some crazy female ghost? If so why wasn't Minato ready to spiral sphere a b***h for harming his wife? |
Blaze1992 chapter 65 . 7/16 So just the PG Disney stuff like Atlantis movie or everything Disney like Pirates OTC/ Star wars shows? |
Blaze1992 chapter 64 . 7/12 . . .? . . . . . .!? . . . . . . . . . . .?! DID YOU JUST KILL OFF THE MC? |
helrio uzugaku chapter 69 . 7/11 Looks like you recovered well enough. Away, away parts 1-2 were poorly made in comlarison to this chapter and the rest of the fic. There was a distinct lack of originality that made this fic likeable. But considering the nature of kingdom hearts and how they really don't change anything that happens i guess it's understandable. I'd like to see Naruto rebuild the keyblade organization. So much potential, so many crossover opportunities so much MATERIAL to add. I'm wondering why certain characters from Disney films didn't get keyblades of their own. Mackey being of the few exceptions. Moana definitely deserved one, rapunzel to, beast if we're being honest. If a strong heart is what you need then God, a lot of Disney characters should have gotten keyblades, ff characters to. So i have to ask, why didn't they? I feel this fic has the potential to fill in the blanks. Now that it's been confirmed another huge war is on the horizon and the order of keybearer's is night but extinct I think it would be a smart move to start reuniting the worlds. Starting with the dc universe, the most publicly accepting of different worlds and alternate universes. I'd also admittedly like seeing square Enix FF worlds used a bit more than they were in the games. I feel it was a wasted resource that never bad a chance to properly shine. Characters were introduced but never seen again like tidus and Waka. Why were rikku, pain and Yuna fairies instead of human? So many things that don't make sense could potentially be mended here. One last thing i want to address, in the final part of Away, away naiaed and te fiti mentioned how moana's ancestor left the world to fight in the keyblade war just before maui stole te fiti's heart. They closed off their world shortly after to contain 'the rot'. So how did they know the keybearers decided to isolate the worlds and turn into a shadow organization left as unknowns for the public to leave unacknowledged? Just a discrepancy I found. |
UrielArcheangel chapter 1 . 7/9 I honestly haven’t read this story but if you check these dude keep working hard |
Blaze1992 chapter 63 . 7/6 Dang girl keeps getting C-blocked by various people. |
Uzushiogakure chapter 69 . 7/6 I can definitely see that Naruto is absences definitely having a huge effect on his loved ones which is to be expected and I do hope you make it back soon. And I'm happy for Victor that he still has Nora granted it's going to take awhile to be able to cure her that's assuming he has the means to be able to do so in the first place perhaps he'll have to ask someone else for help. But yeah I definitely feel for the man. Great chapter though and I'm glad you're updating this again I am really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you stay as safe as possible out there. |
Guest chapter 69 . 7/1 Yuuchi Yosamu- If you're in need of a filler episode you could do the Barbara dies episode (not really) She's doused with Scarecrow's fear toxin and watches herself die then her father Gordon goes to war against Batman & Naruto |
ivankier25 chapter 14 . 6/30 "he came up to her and used his phasing ability to pull Selina's suit and underwear off of her" Dude this shit is Overpowered, imagine Naruto phasing his enemies armors in the middle of a fight then Bam* he sliced them half by using Lunar Rose. |
KyuubiRULESA11 chapter 3 . 6/28 I've read so many fanfics that I've come to love anko. In fact naruto x anko. Kurama fucking anko doesn't seem right in my head. I mean it's an anko thing to do but still. Especially with kurama... in front of naruto and being open about. Great story but why anko... it could have been karui or even another matatabi...never mind just being biased for anko. |
RandomDude92 chapter 1 . 6/27 Just found this fanfiction and I haven't read this one yet but I just gotta post this one. WTF the amount of words in this story is amazing this is my first time seeing a million words on a fanfic damnnnn, oh and chapter 69... nice. |