Great story It's dark, but intriging. I hope we get the big confrontation between Rudy and Pascal you seem to be buliding up to, but either way, very well done!

So i was wondering do you do request? because i have an idea for Chalkzone story that, i think you would make amazing!

The plot would be about Rudy being turned into his old eight year old Oh Yeah cartoons self. The twist is he has all his memories of being ten,but since he has his eight year old brain back, he acts more like how he did when he was younger. He stills remembers that he's ten,but his mentally and emotional dependency is that of his eight year old self. Ours Heroes only have two days or 48 hours to change him back or he will stuck that way forever!

Snap get's along great with Little Rudy, since he was created by him when he was eight, so he knows how he'll act like this, but Penny is freaking out and slowy getting annoyed with how childish, Rudy is acting,

What she doesn't get is Rudy trying his hardest to be mature and brave, but he back at place where he didn't feel the most confindent or strong and his brain develoment is not same as it used to be.

He may remember being Ten,but he really is in all others ways, only eight years old!

things get even more bad, when He and Penny get into fight, which leads to him running away and Snap scolding Penny for not being more paitent with him,since he is now, just a kid.

Now I know what your thinking, how could things get any worse? Well let's add in Skrawl and Craniac trying to come up with another Sceme to take over Chalkzone, when they happen to stubble upon The Great Creator as a helpless, harmless, almost defenceless Third grader.

Will Penny and Rudy make up? Will Skrawl and Craniac win? and will Rudy ever return back to being his older self?

Well you'll just have to write it to find out. Though if you don't want to that's ok to, it's just a suggestion. I just love reading your stories, there so well written and I just know that the next one will be great!

Anyways Thank you and Happy Holidays!

I really like this story. Please update soon. I love your Chalkzone fanfics!

great story man update soon