Honestly this is so cute please consider writing more. There's not enough pidgexlance stuff out there and this is just so great. I think you wrote their characters so well and so adorably that I want to read more. I know this is probably a oneshot but please possibly consider the potential chance of a continuation of this? With quintessence on top? And food goo?
Why must my heart betray my cold exterior so!? Guh

too cute 3

This and Neutral opinion are really sweet. And I can see them as fitting together into a larger whole. I wouldn't mind seeing another story to make a sort of trilogy among them. I enjoy how you write.

This is amazing! I love how well you described everything, how the characters weren't uncharacteristic, and how you took it slow and didn't rush anything.

Nope, no. Not going to ship them, not going to ship them.

Arrggghhh! Too late. I had to go and read your story and fall in love with this paring. Even though I doubt it's going to happen in the show, I can't help but look at Pidge and Lance's interactions.

Thanks a lot for getting me stuck in a ship that I had no idea I'd get stuck in! ;)

I love the slow pace on this one. It's a common set-up, so it'd be easy to rush, but the pace shows some tenderness and guides the reader into the new emotional perspectives gracefully. I really like Pidge and Lance. Surprising that there are so few shipping fics for them :/ But the ones I've found (yours) I like!

Okay so these two are so cute! Thank you! You've accurately described the basis of what it means to like someone without that "we looked into each other's eyes" or some other cliché stuff.

Keep writing!

I loved it! Please tell me that you will do a second chapter!, I would love to read it!

(sorry for my bad english)

Absolutely amazing! Please write more? I'd love to see Lance and Pidge continue from this. Also, kinda want to see Lance's reaction to Pidge's confession. Either way, this made my night!

Just loved it !
I ship LancexPidge so I really like this story . Amazing job! :D
Can't wait for the next part ! See ya !
Have a nice day/night !

You should SOOO update this! It's the ULTIMATE Pidge x Lance story!

Omg omg. This made me cry from happy tears, this is so cute! I really love the Pidge in a dress, and I adore the ending "She's lucky she's cute." Scream, that was adorable.
Thanks for writing this!

sweet, short and cute!
very nice writing

Awesome story! Great imagery, well paced, and really fun to read!

Love this rarepair! Great story! It was really fun to read and well-written. I could practically hear the characters' voices in the dialogue. Keep up the good work!