The wedding vows are beautiful.

Okay, I got to the pony island vacation and realized this was my second time through this story and I loved it just as much the second time. Loved, Loved, Loved your VM stories. I hope you will do more. There just aren't that many writers that are (a) good writers and (b) write for VM. Your banter was spot on to the characters and hilarious. Your original characters were great. It was a very full alternative universe and I love that Veronica wised up right after the Gory fight. Her character change was intelligent. Thanks again.

This was a beautiful love story. Thanks for the flashes of the future. I hope you keep writing VM stories.

great story :)

OMG I loved this chapter. It was so sweet. I was starting to feel a tad anxious near the end because I do NOT do well with any sort of character death and as they grew older I was like " I really hope this ends sweet" and it did. Okay, what happened to Duncan and Theresa? It sounded like Lilly was pretty much adopted by them. Their marriage is goals not even going to lie. Thank you for sharing.

I like this story. I read it like a novel. It is fun with a little original

Your story is unique from other VM stories that I have read. I don't read them much anymore, but the first thing you did that stood out was starting with the divorce papers and then back tracking. I thought the way you had it all come together full circle was very cleverly done and made complete sense. Although I think Logan's reaction to Duncan and Veronica proves they were so NOT ready for marriage, I think the way you ended this story showed it all was for the best. The snapshots into their long marriage was something special and sweet. Thanks for writing it.

Good chapter. Wallace's response to MaDi made me laugh. I agreed with Mac about why not to invite Duncan. Lilly is very cute.

I kind of agree with Duncan. I think some serious marriage counseling is in order. Glad Duncan finally did the right thing.

Can you write Veronica anymore stupid? Jake starts the rumor and she confirms it with her mom, Jake's new wife. This is why I don't read VM stories anymore. It reminds me of how unlikeable Veronica was on the show a lot of the time.

Okay, I started to read this story again, but not liking how stupid Veronica is. No one kisses you unless you let them.

Amazing story. Amazing.

What a fantastic story. I loved the plot. The wedding and the vow renewals was such a clever plot tool. I liked your version of the characters. Your dialogue was spot on to the witty repartee that is a hallmark of the Veronica Mars world. You did a great job with your original characters. I was a little sad that Duncan really never came back into the fold.

Great story. Sorry to see it end.

It's been a lovely ride. Thank you so very much!

OH no its over and I loved every minute of this epilogue. Thank you!