| Reviews for The Hours In Between |
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OodleNoodles chapter 20 . 4/17/2018 Hi! Loved reading through this... Seriously, MM was such a good game, but it made me so curious about what went on between the MC and Seven when they weren't communicating over the phone/app. So, I absolutely LOVED this idea, and loved how in character your characters are...! Thank you so much! |
RiverEcho chapter 20 . 2/5/2018 I liked the good ending, although I feel like the normal end was pretty cute too. I loved how you wrote it, it was beautiful, I felt like I was there. Great job! Can't wait to read the sequel! |
RiverEcho chapter 13 . 2/5/2018 I legit had happy tears when I read about that kiss because I always imagined that they HAD to have shared at least a kiss at Rika's apt! Thank you! TT-TT |
RiverEcho chapter 12 . 2/5/2018 "I don't bite, I was only joking yesterday when I said I would" I died laughing! XD |
Shota Mei chapter 20 . 9/25/2017 I just wanted to let you know that I love this fic soooooo much! thank you3 |
Shota Mei chapter 7 . 9/20/2017 ah.. I really like MC characteristic! |
Shota Mei chapter 6 . 9/20/2017 I really like when Seven placed Ph.D Pepper to his cheek, it's just so cute! |
Shota Mei chapter 1 . 9/20/2017 I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT |
lildragongirl19 chapter 20 . 9/9/2017 I loved this. I loved all of it. Your writing is mature and pleasant, and I admire your integrity with the characters. Your occassional referencing to the route plot points kept the reader focused in. It also served as delightful reminders of those critical moments in Seven's Route that we all remember together. This was fun, sincere, and rather beautiful. I am lookig forward to jumping right into your sequel of Secret Ending 1. |
lildragongirl19 chapter 13 . 9/6/2017 I am loving every single chapter. So glad I stumbled upon this telling of the story. I can't wait to continue on! |
WritingRin chapter 20 . 9/6/2017 Thanks for writing this! The mc dating experience! That turn around of the joke was perfect. You're great at when they start bantering! I liked the math jokes. I liked the kisses too. Oops the thief who stole my heart must have stole my glasses... Too cute! |
WritingRin chapter 18 . 9/6/2017 Hey sorry I've just been lurking but I really liked MC's speech to Saeran. Highlighting the actions and arguing "then why would he..." was good reasoning skills! |
star233933 chapter 1 . 6/16/2017 Wow! This is the best Mystic Messenger story I've ever read! I can tell, even from reading just the first chapter, that it's really clean and well put together. You also did a good job of capturing 707's attitude during this route. I know I won't be able to stop reading this story until I'm done, and so just wanted to say thank you for giving me a legit excuse to squeal/laugh creepily all day. Thanks for the story and hope you remain active! |
Trigzl chapter 13 . 4/19/2017 I'm not even done reading this chapter but my insides are all fluttery with sappy romance. I love LOVE the scene on the roof. You've built up the suspense so well (I have yet to be able to get Sevens good end, so I'm reading this to relay my frustration. He's so freaking annoying. But also cute. Anyway, great story! I'm hoping it's done when I get to the end, haha. Keep up the great writing! |
Hi 3 chapter 10 . 4/2/2017 Yeah... that was dumb but *takes deep breath* says really fast itreallyaddedalottomyshipandiwadlikeomgkickingmycouchcrazilycuzthatswhatidowhenifangirllikealwaysandiwasscreaminglikecrazayomgthefluffTHEEXTREMEFLUFFdiesssomgletmcdosomethingdumbagain.. Gasp plz let her do something like that again... DETERMINATION |