| Reviews for Moonstone: A Worm Alt-Power Fic |
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Guest chapter 7 . 5/9 Please continue this story too! |
Hexenbiest chapter 1 . 6/24/2019 HOLY FUCKING SHIT! Taylor with Kamala 's powers? FUCK YES! |
HellsMaji chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 Why did the wards show up within ten seconds of the alarm? There's not a chance in hell unless circus gave a heads up. I don't buy it. |
Storm0fCrows chapter 7 . 8/4/2018 This is fun and I hope you continue! Thanks for sharing! |
Bobboky chapter 7 . 5/31/2017 cool |
xbox432 chapter 7 . 5/26/2017 Hmm, you keep mentioning that this is the second installment of Moonstone... did you just decide to start over and post new chapters after the old ones while changing the name of the fic? Cause the first few chapters look like the ones I read a while ago, and it's only this and the previous chapter, I think, that looks new. |
drakonpie250 chapter 5 . 2/4/2017 Great story. Please update soon. |
EternityDragon2610 chapter 5 . 12/27/2016 Good stuff so far, I especially like her banter during fights. Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon :D Ciao |
PoisonedWit chapter 4 . 12/23/2016 I'm really enjoying this story. It's a pretty novel turn for the Wormverse, and I'm really interested in how your quite sweeping changes will affect the story. Her recollections and dreams of family life are very well done. Not heavy handed, but still sweet and poignant. Really well written all around. Options for the ship shorthand - Time and Tide (abbreviates to TnT!), Moonblock [like sunblock, but for those hot nights ;-)] Attempt at blurb - Their romance was more than just star crossed. Pulled together from opposite sides, their attraction ushers in a tide of passion. "I'm a busy girl," thought Moonstone, "but for him? I'll make the time." I feel that's pretty awkward, and could be a lot better, but hey...it kinda sounds like bad fanfiction, right? |
Fencer22 chapter 5 . 12/19/2016 Sold! snarky theif Taylor is a special kind of awesome. I also greatly apreciate your semi sweeping changes to canon leas nazi's and less Coil automatically makes for a less stressful plot. |
drago123 chapter 5 . 12/14/2016 Well they certainly got their wish Say what you want about accord but he does have class. |
Bobboky chapter 4 . 12/13/2016 Very nice job |
Reads-by-Lamplight chapter 4 . 12/13/2016 Hilarious...ly awesome |
drago123 chapter 4 . 12/13/2016 Time of the moon? I dunno i think Once in a Blue Moon is a better ship name though XD |
Thinman chapter 3 . 12/4/2016 What's the worst the could happen, oh boy talk about tempting fate. Good work |