oooooooh! really hope you update this, I'm looking forward to more!

update soon!

Update soon!

interesting, very interesting. Please update soon as you are able

Please update the story. It's really good. I've been waiting for you to update for a few months now.

Please, please write more on this. I really like this story and would love to read more.

sweet

Please write another chapter. I love this story.

Sirius and Carrow!? i wonder happened!

You've certainly become more intriguing. I'd love to highlight the first part, the first bit of the James scene, and the last bit of the James scene. Those actually had me intrigued-intrigued, I was hungry to know more, and like a true writer- you starved me of it. With what I hope is a promise for something in the future. I'd also like to note that Aries really doesn't seem much like Harry when he's being written in other POVs, is that purposeful? Did you think that through precisely? It just seems extremely important that you consider something as big as what the entirety of the wizarding world thinks of Aries. The personalities I like, the Potters are adorable, the Wizarding World is pictured well and Narcissa seems to have notable potential as a character. Oh, and that end part with the Potters? You played with my heart a bit. Good job. The only real problem I had at first read was that the final scene was a bit lacking compared to the first ones. I found myself zooming through it. The Guest review actually had me chuckling a bit. By no means ignore it, but it certainly isn't of high priority. I'd also suggest you try and pick up some tips for underwriters (I don't think you're an underwriter, just someone who could do a bit better by writing more). And yes, yes I still want more.

Thank you for a very interesting chapter

Um, I love Sev but I see no way to redeem him in this case. He should have chosen to die at the hands of Voldemort rather than cast the killing curse at a defenseless child. That is completely indefensible, even if he looked anguished. How can Harry grow up under his tutelage?

please update soon.?

This fic has me understandably curious. The plot and substance on its own is respectable- good, even. The overall story seems to be above average, however I feel like the characters could be a bit more assertive. There's also quite a bit of telling where there could be showing. Alecto could've been hated more... I guess there could've been more development before this chapter. I certainly could've felt more emotions. A miniscule detail that irked me was the ending. When you write a cliffhanger, don't make it long and unbearable. It should be like a slap on the face. I would've cut it off abruptly after "...well do it with dignity". That makes the situation scarier. Does he live or die? Does Voldemort really want to kill him? Will Severus help? Less is more when it comes to cliffhangers. Your writing is addicting, and I hope you finish this. It's honestly a shame it isn't getting much attention.