But Minerva failed other students besides Harry. The rest of the staff has, too. But of course Harry is so important that they aren't bothering to look for other students that are close to the edge.

After all, only Harry is important. After that, only Gryffindors are important, then the other two houses and of course Slytherins aren't important at all. (nobody seemed to care when Snape was tortured for years and nearly murdered, just to name one example). Is anyone checking on Neville Longbottom, just to name one?

Yes, everyone is broken over Harry's death.

But did anyone mourn oh, say, Moaning Myrtle?

Other than my caveats, so well written.

I have to say this is very well written. but this is as far as i can go for now too many bad memories. will come back if I feel the need.

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

I noticed that Arthur owned up to breaking Percy-I wonder what happened?

But yes, Arthur is going to put his broken children first; how can he trust they will be safe at Hogwarts? (he knows the twins can fend for themselves).

Oh, my. This is a very good chapter, tells us everything we know about Harry at this point, and reveals Petunia to be a human being after all. Very well done.

It's as good as the rest, but I really hate reading this chapter. I mean good fucking god people... At least have the common decency to bury him with his fucking parents. You've already failed him so massively that he gave up on everything, at least put him with the only people who were willing to do the same for him.

And maybe it's just me and the whole 'not magical' thing, but it seems somewhat insulting to have the pallbearers levitating the coffin, as if they're distancing themselves from the deceased as opposed to symbolically taking up the burden. Then again, that could very well be part of the problem all things considered...

OMG I LITERALLY CRIED LIKE A HUNDRED TIMES READING THIS :'((

Would love to read a chapter from Neville’s point of view. Unfortunately, his life could be another tragedy in the making.

I always like a Fic that deals with the darker subjects of life such as these especially when it comes from those that are affect by it rather then the person who commits it.

If you will wish to continue this. Maybe have Harry appear to Ron about deaftig Voldermort. It could have been a twist, where even in death Harry is still helping others.

But hey, it's your story and I do hope in seeing more admitting that I did skimp the dialogue in the last few chapters since it didn't feel needed for a wonderful story such as this. Have a good and wonderful day, from Dragon Reader.

About bloody time Arthur I'm clapping for you it's about time someone in this world has a spine.

Okay so I'm crying now. That was a lovely letter and the very thought of Ron speaking to Harry only to remember that Harry wasn't there. Was just so real to me, I love the idea how you mentioned they were twins but they just didn't share the blood or the same mother and yet, there bond is there. This is why I could never read Ron banishing stories.

We all have our flaws and Ron has his and to see someone describe their relationship in one chapter without dialogue so well. Was so, lovely to read.

you made me cry.. I was already all wobbly with the first chapters but this last one broke me. and it wasn't even only a tear escaping my eyes, it was outright choked sobbing. you really know how to break hearts

I just finished your story - moreover, is it finished yet? and I absolutely loved every chapter. Focusing on characters like Poppy, Goyle, Arthur W. or A. Diggory instead of the most obvious ones was brilliant and I must say that I shed an awful lot of tears reading it... I won't thank you seeing my eyes tomorrow morning! Thanks fo this anyway, I really enjoyed this story.

The first two chapters were great, so deep.. but this one's real heartbreaking . I felt the pang in the chest. So yeahhhh . Just wanted to say that.. on to the next chap i go

I have tears.
Utterly beautiful.
I had always wondered if the Soul Shard would have died like a 1 Up Life. Allowing Harry to beat death without Voldie having to be the one to do the deed.
I put full ‘blame’ on Dumbledore. The one who placed his weapon into an unloving and abusive home.
His weapon broke.
I am curious on what’s next. Dudley/Petunia, Hermione and Luna.
Severus Snape.
I’m wondering about Goyle?
Is he dyslexic?