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   Venomis chapter 8 . 5/21/2019 Well that was kinda hot hehe. I love those two, they have so much chemistry! I have a soft spot for complicated characters and Emma surely is, ha! I love how Juice teased her in the beginning, and I can't wait for the next chapter. You are really talented! |
| Venomis chapter 7 . 5/21/2019 This was actually a comment on the previous chapter, I didn't know that you can't post two reviews on one chapter. I've never read on this site before haha. - What is there not to like about the way the story goes? I love it! I like the initiative Juice is taking. I have a feeling Emma's going to regret it later since she doesn't seem the best in accepting her feelings so I'm curious to your plan. The only thing that is annoying me a bit is your use of "&" now and then instead of "and". I know it's really nitpicky but somehow it feels less mature while your writing style is so beautiful! - As for this chapter: I love how you described the kiss, there were a good amount of details but it wasn't too much. I hadn't expected Emma to respond any different haha, and I really like her friendship with Opie! |
| Venomis chapter 6 . 5/21/2019 To be honest some of those comments are just rude and well... weird. I absolutely agree with you and well, I don't miss Tara at all xD I love it up to now, I've read a bunch of Juice stories and I really like where you take it! |
| Venomis chapter 5 . 5/21/2019 Great chapter! I like the fact that they're not head over heels all of sudden but that their feelings slowly seem to grow even though they're both not happy about it. :) |
| Venomis chapter 4 . 5/20/2019 The friendship of the three is amazing! I love how you write down Juice's confused feelings, it's perfect! |
| Venomis chapter 3 . 5/20/2019 Aww. She's such a bitch haha but he deals well with it! Hope that he's the one playing hard to get later ;D |
| Venomis chapter 2 . 5/20/2019 I like this! There's definitely chemistry between them. |
| Venomis chapter 1 . 5/20/2019 I'm writing a story about Juice on high school too, I can't wait to see where you will take it! :) I loved the line that he asked for the grade she was in haha. So typical Juice! |
| stordec23 chapter 6 . 4/18/2018 OMG THIS CHAPTER TOTALLY BECAME MY FAVORITE I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE! :D |
| Ang R chapter 6 . 4/16/2018 I like that he told her that he was going to kiss her. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/26/2018 Still no actual interaction with jax and tara. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/26/2018 Not enough Tara. Why is she never around Jax!? They were inseparable in high school |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2018 Hair to her belly button, really? Characters seem crap when you make their appearance too perfect. |
| stordec23 chapter 5 . 3/7/2018 EMMA TOTALLY LIKES JUICE SHE CAN DENY IT ALL SHE WANTS! |
| stordec23 chapter 4 . 3/7/2018 LOVED THIS CHAPTER HOPE JUICE DOES GO FOR IT LIKE JAX SAID! :D |
