Wow, very good. Ever since I read soul intercourse all those years ago I've been hungry for more homusaya. So finding this fic was a very welcome surprise

You do a remarkable job of capturing their personalities, especially what they might be like in a few years time.

So glad to see this story lives! Unquestionably the best Homura/Sayaka story I've seen. It definitely feels like a bit of an odd pairing to me, but you present in a way that feels incredibly real and believable. I find your depiction of the way they lean on each other to cope and overcome what they've been through to be really beautiful. Keep it up!

oh thanks good, this is drug for me, you are awesome, excellent chapter

Their relationship is starting to get warmer, and its nice!
Seeing Homura finally relax is also nice, as is Sayaka's relationship with her. Hopefully things will get better from now on.

do sayaka and homura sleep in the same bed now like sayaka wanted in the last chapter

I'm glad to see that even though she's gone, Kyoko still means a great deal to Sayaka and that her influence lives on. Her primarily delinquent influence.

Now I'm wondering, is Homura Sayaka's first bed partner, or did she and Kyoko ever get that far in their relationship?

I'm really enjoying this story and hope to see more soon!

Hell rush an update! Seeing Homura and Sayaka happy and laughing warmed my heart

Damn good chapter! The aquarium scene was perfect!

That was hot

I love it! Very sexy, very sweet! Sayaka goes full Sayakute!
I love how this story builds these romantic feeling so powerfully. That moment at the aquari-yum had me all hot and bothered with forbidden desires! It's definitely a moment for initiating something very intimate, and sure enough Homura no does not deny her feelings! I love Sayaka's clever ideas for getting more intimate with Homura. I'm surprised this massage treatment isn't a more common element in fics. It definitely works in setting the scene and creating some seriously hot HomuSaya magic!

Is this finished? o.o

Homura and Sayaka are very hard to write as a romantic ship, but when done well, it can be very enjoyable. I'm liking this fic, with both of them trying to fill the voids of each other's hearts.

My only question, though... Homura steals weapons from the yakuza, why not steal their money too? Homura doesn't really care about stealing, at least not from them.

Really like this, looking forward to seeing where you b take this.

Wonder what will happen next