Changing into our own character in this story, sweet man. I like that idea ...

Enjoyed your fic till the end ! I found it really cool, but I thought that you could have added some romance a lot sonner
anyway it was great !

Enjoyed the series to the last chapter. Not as much romance as I thought it would, very much God-Eater-like plot, still I feel like missing something in the plot though. Thanks for your hard work.

Hey since God Eater 2 Rage burst is out maybe you could make another god eater fanfiction amd bring the characters from the start into it

This was a nice conclusion to this fanfic and I enjoyed it to the very end. I do hope that you will write up that follow-up story!

I liked this story a lot! Your style has evolved from a little awkward in the beginning to quite nice in the end. Your action scenes in particular are quite epic! I also like your witty sense of humor. You also have a knack for being concise and to the point, sometimes to a fault. I think this story is ripe for future one shots and side stories for sure!

I enjoy reading this story and think it's great but I can't help but notice lindow just disappeared from the story (also if you get a anonymous review similar to this one sorry. I just wasn't sure if it went through)

This was an AMAZING chapter Subzero Dragon. I love the characterization of Kanon and Winter in this chapter and how Winter is now opening up even more to Kanon. This chapter really shows Kanon's growth as a God Eater.

Wait so it's like what happened to dude fro the God eater anime huh -_- Okay then. well lets see how Kanon reacts

And of course the bullshit that happens with a lot of Oc's the typical you think you know suffering line and how they've had it harder or gone through more smh and this was such a good story too.

Maybe a pair of horns Like the ones (or similar) to Kurosaki Ichigo's Vasto Lorde form so he can shoot Oracle power or bullet between his horns

Kanon does not really know much about Winter's past and bonding moments do provide decent character development. It can bring out Winter's "human" side.

When Kanon had the resonance with Winter, maybe have her help overcome Winter's past? Winter is still suffering from his mysterious past where he couldn't save his old friends. If she saw Winter's memories then it can then present some more comforting moments between them. He can't do everything alone.

I wonder if Winter will be a dual wielding God Eater

Is Winter going to transform into an Aragami too? A black Chi-You?