| Reviews for Newt Scamander (Hurt,Injured) |
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Guest chapter 19 . 1/18/2019 Ok I love this but isn’t newt goin a bit far with keeping a FREAKING OBSCURUS IN HIS BODY? *ahem*i thoroughly enjoyed this story though |
wirLess chapter 6 . 12/27/2018 I love your story so much! |
John Smith chapter 19 . 12/12/2018 What a GREAT story overall! I'm happy I found it and happier that you wrote it! I love the way you wrote the characters, developed the plot, described the imagery, and separated the chapters. It was a wild ride but a great one. Happy writing! |
John Smith chapter 18 . 12/12/2018 Awesome chapter, wow. Credence is such a good guy. I love the way you've written him in this story so much! |
John Smith chapter 17 . 12/12/2018 Wow, Newt making a deal with an obscurous? Sounds dangerous. I hope he knows what he's doing... Great chapter! |
John Smith chapter 16 . 12/12/2018 Oh wow this is incredibly interesting. I really love the way you describe the battle between the two obscuri. It's creepy and action packed all at once. This story is coming to such a cool climax! |
John Smith chapter 15 . 12/12/2018 Woah, great chapter. That ending is so powerful and such a great way to leave a chapter hanging! |
John Smith chapter 14 . 12/12/2018 Huh, surprising that Grindelwald severed the connection himself. It makes sense, though. Love that you're showing us what the ladies are up to again! |
John Smith chapter 13 . 12/12/2018 This is an incredibly powerful battle, and I love the way you have it going on in Newt's head rather than physically. Physical battles are very cool, but this is so unique! I appreciate it! |
John Smith chapter 12 . 12/12/2018 OOOH my gosh I almost lost it this chapter LOL. For a moment I thought they were dead and I was like NOOOO. Great chapter, so much emotion and such great description! |
John Smith chapter 11 . 12/12/2018 Holy crap... talk about intense. This chapter was heart-wrenching. You are really pulling out the stops with this story. I appreciate the effort and skill you are putting into it, but I'm still sad about it! |
John Smith chapter 10 . 12/12/2018 NO NOT THE OCCAMY! Aw man! This was an intense chapter. Grindelwald is such a scary guy... dang. Great chapter! |
John Smith chapter 9 . 12/12/2018 Oohh wow that was interesting. I wasn't expecting Newt to track him in the same way, but I ESPECIALLY wasn't expecting that ending. Yet another good chapter! |
John Smith chapter 8 . 12/12/2018 Oh wow, that was a fully intense chapter. I have to admit I chuckled a little bit though when we found out Newt's ribs were broken. I imagine that Jacob punching him in the chest didn't help that... but other than that, it was super intense and emotional to read. These poor guys! |
John Smith chapter 7 . 12/12/2018 NO! Again - poor Newt just CANNOT catch a break. This chapter was quick to read but that lent itself well to the intense battle. It should be fast paced! Great job! |