Sooo cute!

I'm so looking forward for the academy.

Also,her father still isn't revealed,maybe the guy's an OC,minor character or Pain/Pein/the guy with the rinnegan and piercings

ITS PAIN/pein fuckever his name. THAT GUY ! he is the father! Only rogue uzumaki I know. If not oh well. Thank you for a wonderfully captivating story! It's really something new and I haven't seen one like it before. Thank you!

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Pointless first chapter. Only thing that happened was that it told me what I already knew from the description. This is a common mistake for Self Inserts though.

Very interesting so far, a few spelling mistakes but nicely laid out compared to others Gj

This story is really good. I wish you a good health and instant recovery. Update soon ! :) :)

Even though you put in a preview that Chieko / Naruto / Sasuke is going to be a team.
I do hope that Chieko will be the main PoV, obviously when she's either unconcious or asleep while others are awake, POV Switch just to have ''plot'' happen.

I'll be honest, I'm afraid this still fic will turn from ''Chieko and Co'' into ''Naruto and Chieko is somewhere there''

I have read so many ''OC focused'' story's where the OC just becomes a background Character adding absolutely nothing, besides being a little bit more useful then Sakura.

Very interesting beginning. I'm super curious about who Chieko's biological father is... And how her presence will change anything in the Naruto world.

The cute moment when Chieko called Shikaku Father though. And yeah the stuff about Kakashi and Chieko seeing their own (single) parents killing themselves. and being geniuses. I'm actually laughing at the irony of that because she's almost like a Kakashi 2.0 I was not expecting her to be adopted by the Nara clan.

I like this a lot, I hope she sometimes tries to check on Kakashi too. and maybe a bit protective Shikamaru. because of the condition she came in, and that she will no doubt face prejudice for her heritage (where she came from, where her parents came from, skin color)

Ugh so cute, to moment Chieko called him Father... I would have been grinning the whole evening as well.

also, does Shikaku and Yoshino know that Chieko's mother sliced her own throat infront of her own daughter?

I think Chieko reminds Kakashi of himself because of the genius And the suicide

Maybe she can learn chakra as a hobby and have desk Work jobs like maybe be a teacher in the academy

Amazing story I can't wait for the next chapter :)

I really love the story so far! I'm hoping Kakashi shows up often - poor dude needs some cuteness and happiness in his life. I'm also hoping her new family is nice (even if it's a bunch of OCs) since the poor kid has had it rough so far. I read the whole story today so hopefully I read the updated versions? Anyways, I can't wait to see what you have planned and I hope you update soon!

P.S. I would never have been able to tell that English is your second language! Your writing flows really nicely and is completely natural.

P.P.S. I also can't wait to find out who her dad is! Is he going to be the one taking care of her?