It still seems unfinished. Will Dudley end up like Arianna Dumbledore?

cannot wait to see what happens. would love it if dudley was a wizard but idk how thatd work. also Harry's reaction to dudley in hogwarts... XD

I liked this story so far. Makeing Snape adopt Dudley was a great idea, please countinue working as so as possible

I see a great story to be made here and I totally know you can do it!

I like the start, maybe Dudley will learn how to treated by a normal parent even if magical? I wonder where Harry is though?

I like it

Perfect development.

Wow! Dudley had this coming. Maybe there be hope for him not grow up to be loser that thinks get anything he wants. Dudley so much like James potter only more evil because of his parents. Snape teach him way life really is. It fitting end to real brat. I would like to know what happen to harry. Anyway I hope you update soon.

Where is Harry? Did the Dursleys kill him?