Honestly, my issue isn't with the plot or with the characters, even if I do dislike them, but moreso with the author's label of this story as 'Romance'. This isn't a romance. This is a horror story. You're romanticising an abusive relationship that is fundamentally based on power imbalance. It's fu cking gross. If this was at all ironic then it'd be an interesting piece but I fear you're actually serious.

A literal story on Red F ucking Flags, Run Away ASAP. I honestly can't tell which character I dislike the most or if I dislike them all equally. How dare this human possess self preservation and deny the 'love' of this vampire lord. She should be grateful he is being 'kind' at the bare minimum and didn't lock her up in a tower with his wife and instead forced her to stay in his room instead, where she can't leave if she wants to (an actual chapter LMAO). He could lock her up in a cell for disobeying him. OH. Wait...yep, did that too. And. You know what? She should feel guilty for taking a moment for herself without him breathing down her neck. She should spend a night in the cell to REALLY think about what an awful person she's been. Also, while she's at it she should mark her forehead with DOORMAT.

This author's version of the mating bond is basically slavery, with the favour siding with the powerful party. I mean do what you want? But don't paint this s hit as love. Stupid kids will come across this and read it and take it at face value. You're doing a disservice to them.

If you like wasting your time, this is the story for you. Really did the job for me. Cheers.

i just binge read your story and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

That was such a plot twist again but I had an inkling that Emilio and Alice would help save the day! Thats pretty cool Emilio basically has a compass aligned to her.
I loved the ending its been lovely reading the whole of it and seeing their relationship develop and progress has been amazing! It ended on a good part, because really its just the start for them. I like to imagine one day Emilio will find a mate and be Carlisle v2.

this is how abusive relationships continue on

idiotic

Thank you for this story. I think you wrote Lia very believable. Good balance between helpless and strong.

I mean what was the thought process that if they were Vampires what would she do ? or did she just not get to thinking about that ?

I binge read this and it was amazing. Would love a sequel or maybe even a one-shot/epilogue of their live together.

It's over...and bah, not a bit of Fiendfyre to be seen. :( But I guess she's about to FEEL some fire, eh? I suppose that will have to suffice.

And Emilio being such a downer! Seriously, there are lots of ways to get around the whole Vampire/human thing. So is she going to be a people drinker?

I'm sorry to see this end. :/ But, all good things must end. Hey, I know: you could write an epilogue. Like, "19 years later..." or heck, even "One hundred years later..."

Anyway, excellent story, and congrats on a great completion!

This was a phenomenal story to read thank you for finishing it, it is beautifully written and the complexity of the characters was simply captivating to read. So again thank you for persevering to see this story to the end.

Wow... just incredible.. the way you tied everything together and handled any loose ends. This just feels like it was the perfect way to end this story. Having Emilio with his tracking sense and I always liked Alice, so it was nice to see her play a part. I couldn't have imagined a better ending, exceptionally well done! I'm sad that it's over but I'm thankful I had a chance to enjoy it. No matter what happens don't ever stop writing, you're too good at it. 3

Aaaaaawwwww I loved this chapter! Aro's so sweet and they're so adorable. Sad for it to be over, but excited to see what comes next!

What..the..fuck... I have no idea what just happened. What is Lia thinking, I don't believe she wants to leave Aro, but why did she kiss Stoyan, is she just stalling? I'm so confused, I wish the end wasn't near but I can't wait for it! Hurry up Ani! lol

Only one more chapter? :O

OK, if you don't like my Fiendfyre, how about a good Bombarda Maxima? I mean, that should destroy a marble vampire. Would sure come in handy at the moment for poor Lia.