Ha! The krogan bouncer... Hilarious

Well that was ambiguous and confusing, as all good Reaper chapters should be. And there were so many good little bits in it, like the " the nutcases on a turian-dominated prepper page" and the whole "murderous fake-boyfriend" bit. And every scene written from Miranda's perspective is just so wonderfully arrogant.

In terms of the actual *prose* I think this is your best chapter yet.

Answers indeed, good update.

Great job again. So Kaidan got rather important pieces of info. Now we just gotta hope Liara can figure out everything most likely she can, but can she get it all and fast enough is question. Plus I wonder who is the inheritor, given talks with Javik from Mass Effect I would suspect it being Asari race as a whole but not so sure. Guess we will find out soon.

At least Shepard and Garrus had much needed talk, Garrus for sure needed it and I suspect that Shepard having good friends like Garrus along with Leng will help her much when she get close or reaches her breaking point. And nice touch of humor there with EDI, I wonder if she is already picking up traits from Joker :D.

And Wong, I really wonder just how much she will discover and just how deep it will get her. Now we just gotta hope that it won't kill her.

And Valern is midst of even bigger scheme and many of them. I really wonder about League, but I honestly fear them a bit are they able to see Reaper's as the true threat or just something to deal with once they have overthrown current regime. If one of the main Citadel nations fall apart trouble and chaos it causes is beyond massive. Of course it could be also that Reaper are controlling League with that very mindset, but that most likely is paranoid part of me, but guess we will see.

And rather nice take on Miranda's mind. Her being refused and her thoughts over it were rather great and well done, and most likely true for early ME2 persona. And now her meeting with Jondam is fast approaching without her knowing should be fun to see just how she will handle that also.

Honestly good take on Codex also, nice point there specially on just how we humans would view monarchy or inheritance system and why.

Overall great job again and I hope that you update soon.

Only one chapter for the whole of the Hock heist? That's unfortunate, because everything here was absolutely amazing and I wish there was more of it. Hock himself is just an absolutely amazing and completely convincing asshole, the operation of the heist itself is perfect and I legit was not expecting the ending.

I am, however, disappointed that even in the enlightened era of human unification and Citadel Council membership, humanity has yet to divorce itself from "The Classics".

Was not expecting the spire mission to play out like this, but I really quite liked it. The intra-party rift over batarian casualties, the idea of indoctrinated troops trying to "show people the truth of the Spire" (now I'm imagining husks in bad suits going door to door and handing out pamphlets), and a batatrian having to put up with *shudder* PAID farmhands because he's not important enough to be allowed to own slaves... it's all the little details that make this.

Great job again. So Morneua's mission is bit closer to completion and at least there was some justice if unhappy deaths also. Did not remember that Kasumi is dead here or was she killed off screen. Still it makes me sad she was funny.

But still damm Morneua it's one mess after another, but perhaps it is good here since people are forged by their experiences and these events will hone him to the person he is or rather will be, if the progress does not kill that is.

Why do I get feeling that Zaeed wrote or said that last line about Blue Suns personally. I really wonder why :D. At least Suns are doing well and when Reapers arriave that might be real life safer since with them active and large as they are there is chance of united resistance/force in Terminus if they managed to ally with Aria also.

Overall great job again and I hope that you update soon.

FUBAR is right. Even the most basic spellchecking software would have made this...text, much more readable. You DO know spellchecking software exist, right ? And it even comes free ? And that you'd need more than an absolute basics of English to write a story that is more than a garbled mess ?

Excellent update.

Great chapter!

Great job in presenting the moral issue revolving the Batarians and Liara's views there. Although in the situation they were in, I would still say, that's not really the time to be arguing about it. I do like the idea of seeing how other human soldiers view the Batarians at the moment outside of Shepard's experiences.

And it was a small part, but I did like how the reapers got a couple words in here through one of the Batarians. I think it's good to show that they're, personally, not seemingly 100% focused on Shepard. I also liked that the attempted monologue was cut off. I prefer to think they get annoyed at that.

Anyways, thank you for updating, I'm looking forward to more :)

Miller really should be court Marshalled for what he did to those innocent Battarians that was a war crime pure and simple.

Good update.

Great job again. So rather nasty shocks here for Liara, but most likely needed. She saw the real ugly side of war, she did not clearly see with travelling on Shepards group. And given the scale of things to come this was pretty minor level as evil as it is to say that. Liara still got much needed lesson that will benefit her in the future even if she will not like it and for good reason.

Somehow I suspect that Miranda actually approves the choice made here even some she will claim would have done better. Ruthless calculus is after all at this point her point of view if I remember right.

Too bad on Haugen how some things happened here, but positive thing is that he is getting more and more clearer reputation as a man who will do what is needed to be done even if it ugly. And he certainly seems like a man who can handle that fact and task's that come with it.

Overall great job again and I hope that you update soon.

PS. Stay healthy.

Great chapter!

I love the banter between Wrex and the rest of the squad.
And great job in making it appear as if Wrex is actually trying to embrace things that aren't necessarily Krogan-like. Krogan are obviously going to continue to act like Krogan, but you can see that where possible, Wrex is still trying to improve things for them. With their scientists, doctors, and various tactics to prevent casualties whereas the other side just throws bodies at them with no regard.

The changes to the overall Tuchanka mission were great as well. Really enjoyed the dialogue between Mordin, Wrex and Maelon near the end.
I'm not really an action person so I don't have much to add regarding those scenes, although I still like the jokes and kill counting between the squad. Makes me feel a bit more bummed out how Wrex kicked them out at the end there.

Anyway, thank you for the update, looking forward to more :)

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