I'm keen to keep reading as the plot is conceptually interesting. A couple comments I have are1) goblins, not dwarves2) the explanation of the unit is a bit disorganized which makes it confusingI'd suggest not hopping between introducing field agents and non-field agents3) everything and everyone is labelled as surprising or unexpected which makes it sound pedantic. Overall though, the writing is well detailed and the story is advancing at a good pace.

Wonderfully simple and sweet story! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for writing itAlice

Did you mean Majorca? And I think Portioner should have been Potionier.

The dwarves? Don’t you mean the Goblins of Gingott’s?

What. Just. Happened?
I'm excited to read more

I loved reading this story

:D

Nice!

Thank you for a great Weasley twins x Hermione story! I like the themes of family and suspense in this, though it's slightly haunting to think about reviving Bellatrix. I love the side of Unspeakable Draco x Auror Harry, and thanks for reviving our favorite characters!

Wow, murder in the prologue by Hermione the Unspeakable Granger.

that was awesome!

That was one of the most unique fan fictions I’ve ever read. I love the pairing of Fred/George/Hermione and I think you represented them well. One criticism I would say is to watch your tenses when you write. You often start in past tense then move to present tense. It can be a little jarring as a reader. Other than that, you did a marvelous job!

Well, consider me intrigued.

Awesome story!

Hope Harry comes around. He was supposed to be Hermione’s best friend too and he should feel horrible for ditching her for an unloyal friend like Ron