I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Contente d'avoir vérifié votre bio, je peux donc écrire en français. Je ne suis pas fan des OC dans cette section mais je dois avouer que je suis particulièrement intriguée par votre fic. L'histoire est plutôt originale et je trouve qu'elle est bien pensée et bien écrite, même si j'ai un peu de mal à rassembler toutes les pièces du puzzle. En même temps, j'imagine que c'est tout l'intérêt de votre fic. J'ai hâte de lire la suite.

PS. I like the way Will Graham ended up. The way you described him was really nice. I could imagine how terrible he must have looked.

Yup, I liked the eight chapter, and I like this fanfic more than any other story since you keep the characters apart. You don't force a kiss or a hug or sex between Andrea and Lecter. You can see that they care about each other, but you're not forcing anything, and that's what I like about it. You also keep your chapters at a satisfying length, not too short so I get disappointed, and not too long so it becomes a struggle. Keep up the good work, and when it comes to your English, it's improved and I can see you're more confident about it.

Another great chapter, I Love it!

The description in this chapter was awesome. I loved how you revealed things without being too direct, and once more your dialogue was a delight to read. Loving how you're writing this, especially Hannibal! It's hard to capture him accurately, but so far there's very little room for complaint. Thanks for the update!

It's 6AM, I'm on vacation with my mother and her snoring is keeping me awake. I'm reading your fanfic and oh boy, I love it! It's so well written it makes me want to start writing again! I like every bit of your story, and even though I see that English isn't your first language, it's no bother to me. Hope to see future updates, truly a good story!

It appears I missed reviewing chapter six! But here I am, reading this amazingly awesome fanfic once more because it truly blows my mind. The similarities between Hannibal and Andrea are very noticable, and with the constant switch between time frames I'm very interested in seeing how she became what she is presently. I'm sure you'll get to that, though, and I'm excited to see what you'll do with it. This story has much potential to be great.
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You took a tad more time for this chapter. I guess you've been busy? Not bad, not bad at all, a nice mashup and mixture that certainly is entertaining. The only minor flaw would be your personal contribution was somewhat slim this chapter, but I'm sure that'll be corrected the next chapter.

What a delight for me to have come across this story! I am in love with your style of writing and the dialogue here, it's just so smooth and pleasant to read. I really am enjoying the archetype you're going for here and I can't wait to see what will happen in the following chapters, especially since they're doubled as the last and present. Thanks for writing such a wonderful story and please update soon.
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Not bad, that touch of Hannibal in Andrea's speech content and pattern. And, a nice touch to have him visit her, to set her free.

I would have preferred, though... no, wait... This chapter would have benefitted from a little more body, though. Such a lovely exchange and sweet scene deserves a bit more room to breathe, wouldn't you agree? A good wine needs to (and deserves to) stand before consumption.

Ah indeed, you did mention the alternating chapters before the beginning of the first chapter. Somehow, it didn't land, though. My bad, as they say...

How on earth are you going to solve the problem you created: the change of Andrea as she is in this chapter (the past) and the present Andrea, I am very interested to read how that tookplace as this seems to be the pivotal point of that part of the story. And second, I am dying to know what direction the plot will take in the present. What will happen to Andrea, or what will she do, in the present? I smell a good number of chapters coming up to explain all that, I hope their plot will scent as good as their number :-)

I think I can live with the choice, but maybe I'll just replace Andrea's name with Clarice's in my mind. Oh my - stop the presses, wait a sec - if I do that, how can I accept the very AU fact of Andrea/Clarice and Will being a couple? I think I have no option other than accept your choice then.

Ah, past and preset alternate with each chapter. I must admit that does explain things. Was there a reason for you not to tell your readers earlier, or did you just forget?

Don't you think the 'Or maybe he's just stressing out' at the beginning is a bit of an anticlimax? After so many strong contrasts before/after, such a line, such a weak excuse?

The idea of Hannibal having killed them both already figuratively was a nice touch, though, as was the seventh circle reference.

It's a valid decision to jump towards this point in time, and leave in to our imaginations to fill in how he set her free. Some will say that is exactly the part one should not skip, but apparently you feel their togetherness after that act is the more interesting part. I personally feel both periods in their lives matter, and it's good to focus on either one. The onlt downside to your choice is that you really need to come up with something good, to compensate for not telling about the how. I /am/ curious, you're only hinting at the /why/ so far, and managed to pique my interest. I only hope - and think you'll manage - you actually wake it worthwhile. Let's await and see!

Not bad, really. Odd that you decided to have another character than Clarice in the picture, I do not understand that choic, but let's see where you're taking this...