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Golden feathers Edward chapter 4 . 9/11/2017 This is a good story so far! I like how they are brothers. If it's still up in the air I ask there be no pairing please. XD |
BobbityBibbity chapter 4 . 6/8/2017 Kind of late to the party but gotta say... I was digging the DannyxKikyo thing from the first chapter. What? Biju need love too! And since Danny is a halfa he is the only one that could actually REACH her inside that seal to provide said 'love'. Hey, none of you can deny that it would offer the most hilarious opportunities and certainly be the most unique pairing. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6/2017 Lmao, Naruto has such horrible luck on the kissing front. xDD But yaaaaaaaaay! New update! :D |
HateReborn27 chapter 4 . 4/2/2017 Did naruto kiss sasuke ? and who is the purple hair guy? |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/19/2017 Very unique story. Even though it's not too detailed, which is a blessing due to how this fic started, it's very interesting. But they're what; 4, 5? And they took down a shinobi? Okay, they did have the element of surprise, I'll give you that. But I think they shouldn't be SO OP. They do have child bodies, after all. I dunno, I'd just be wary about that. But either way, it'd be great if you picked this story up again. :] I get the feeling it'd be a really good story if it kept going. (Also, maybe Danny and Sasuke would end up getting close enough to where he WON'T runaway from the village like he did canonically? I really like how Danny being there is causing changes. It's really cool seeing how one person can change everything.) |
PsychePetras chapter 3 . 3/19/2017 Please update soon |
EcoReibun chapter 3 . 2/24/2017 I love how your putting some ships on the spot lol. I don't care much for any ships in this story that it may or may not have, but I ask if you do ship one or both of them with someone that is not mentioned very often and or is not very obvious. Not that I have anything againced it, I just would rather focus on the plot and not romances. |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/26/2017 Im enjoying this |
messedupmoon chapter 3 . 1/16/2017 nice. thanks for the update |
Dodles chapter 2 . 1/2/2017 I would realy like to see danny whit a harem and naruto with single and have naruto laugh at danny on situations with the harem. Good story and writing is good |
Doss5vaan chapter 2 . 12/17/2016 Keep up the good work this is good |
Way-nin2012 chapter 2 . 12/9/2016 well look at it this way him and danny are living with anko right now so if they were to follow anko to one of her interrogation while ino's father brought ino to teach her the basic of interrogation she and naruto might start wanting to see who's better that will later develop into having feelings for one another but just my idea. its your story you can do what you want with it |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2016 this is a good start keep it up |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 I liked the first chapter, also for your first question, go with pairings. I think it's better than the harems because it doesn't seem so forced. |
Way-nin2012 chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 Pairings should be Naruto and Ino Danny and Hinata |