Well, if Ruby is paired with anyone but Weiss im out. Actually should just drop it now rather than read however long only to find Ruby or Weiss paired with someone i don't like and drop it then. Nothing worse than reading 50k or more words into a story only to find the pairing is one you don't like.

This chapter makes no sense. They are faunus here and thus should be able to smell that there is a Grimm in that cave. You can't change shit and expect things to go the same, this is one forced ass chapter.

Just binged all eleven chapters that you have up so far. I’ve gotta say, I like the concept and this is a damn good read for the dynamics alone, but I think you either need a grammar checker, beta, or to just plain go over your work before you post it, because it feels like I’m reading a first draft sometimes.
Your punctuation is a little off, especially in your dialogue. I saw an instance where you mixed up “you’re” with “your”. Heck, in this chapter, you misspelled Yang’s name once.
There’s quite a bit to improve on, but in general so far, I’m really enjoying this story.

Very badass chapter

Huzzah for updates.

Interesting chapter, great dialogues and i really hope after this Weiss will quiet a little. Best of luck with everything.

adem tarous

Very nice chapter and my congratulations for regaining so fast the chapters, i hope other authors will take example. I see Weiss is beginning already to doubting her family's teachings and i wishing at least before the duel her and Ruby will fix things, making the fight just a formality. I make the same requestions about the alphas' strenght. I hope also for Blacksun and Arkos, keep up the good work and see you soon.

I would prefer Weiss' problems to end earlier,but i trust you. By the way,today is my birthday and i consider this your gift. Maybe also give Jaune some firearm. Keep up the good work and see you soon.

I hope to be useful and not annoying

And i advice you ' A white rose under the sea'

Pretty nice chapter, my congratulation for the speed. I'm glad things are already going different from canon and i can't wait to see this fight. Regarding Nora i would use horns, since legs is slightly creepy in my opinion, while i'm hoping this isn't a thing 'Alpha are always and aniways the strongest, and no one can change its status', Patattack already did in 'Endangered Species' and it was horrible. Write thath with training, everyone can obtain the power of an alpha. Keep up the good work and see you soon, also good Easter.

Feathers for her hair, I never would've guessed that.

Epic battle, i can't wait to see whath else will happen. Good work.

I have a question, does Pyrrha have a beak or is it wings, and what are the animal features the other characters have? I know you said what they are but you didn't say what the parts were.