Will you update this it seems really interesting I also like the beginning I hope you comeback and update

This was fine, but I felt that it could have been better...especially in the spelling department.

Please continue soon

I like it so far

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon..

Also is this before the official start of the manga right after the Hinatsuki incident?

Good start. Though it's "Mayura" not "Mayuri". Mayuri is a totally different character and definitely not a kind, pure and beautiful soul.

Cool story. I wonder if Mayuri will be the other star to Naruto's "lonely star".

This is pretty good! Hope to read more soon.

Good idea continue