Loved it, lol

What do I need to do, to get you into these long flights? I'd like to do it, if this is the outcome we get.

great story!

Sooo good. Loved the meaning of shoes for Jane.

just read this story for the first time...it was so good...the characters were spot on.

MissDonnie

Oh yes. Jane in jeans. And work boots. Two images I could definitely uh, get behind. Thanks for that. ;)

I'm glad you decided to post it! It's very very sweet and brings back the warm fuzzy feels I had while watching the last scene of TM. Thank you :)

As your stories got me into mentalist fanfiction in the first place I was pleased to see you have written one more. A lovely uncomplicated story in your usual very readable way. Thankyou.

He he he! Glad to see you're back in TM territory Hayseed, even if it's just for a one-shot. Well done, it was a fun reading and I loved the moving idea of the old brown shoes being Angela's last gift. Will it take another flight to get a new Mentalist story?

Enjoyed the chapter about Daddy's new shoes. Look forward to reading more.

I enjoyed this immensely, as I do all your other work. But my favorite part was the line about Jane's old shoes being a gift from Angela. I sucked in a sharp breath when I read that - dang, that was powerful. Though I know you're writing other things, I hope you'll keep writing for us occasionally! Thanks for this!

So glad you shared this! It is a very good piece.

I'm so glad you decided to share this very enjoyable glimpse into their married life! Loved the detail about his old shoes being from Angela and Lisbon deciding to pay for the new ones with poker winnings. Welcome back, and I hope this isn't the last we'll hear from you!

Awe! That was sweet! Thanks for keeping the Mentalist alive with great fan-fiction.

This was totally wonderful, a simple loving story. Great job; and please don't ever stop writing, because like me, many others truly enjoy reading your stories.