Reviews for Viking Hell
Cess18 chapter 5 . 9/15/2017
I love it! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/28/2017
Yay! New chapter. Will Elsa now go to Berk? If so, I wonder how she will react.
RaiderWolf chapter 4 . 3/8/2017
Good start, can't wait for more.

*throws empty rum bottle and saunters to the center of the room*

So am I worthy to sail with the great LegendaryOutcast, or should I shoot you now?

*Pauses for reply*

Sorry,old habits and all that.
shiningmoonslayer chapter 4 . 2/21/2017
Man this is a really good story in all honesty I didn't know what to expect but well done I can't wait for the next chapter
LucyBC1990 chapter 4 . 2/19/2017
Hiccup is so right, everything comes with courage. You have to believe in yourself and in what you are doing and then everyone else will believe it too. If you dont believe in something mostly it will not work. A lot of people dont believe it, but the mind is still somehow connected to the body.
Short question where are Stoick and the people from Arendelle who had come with Elsa. They dont really let their princess all alone with a stringer who is also a young man, a Viking and has a dragon.
That was a great way of Hiccup to coax out Elsa courage. Just what he would do, something crazy.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2017
This is good. Thank you for the update.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/14/2017
Please update soon. This is interesting.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2016
So now that they are near Berk, I can't help but wonder how Astrid will react to another woman who is developing a crush on Hiccup. The next chapter is gonna be good.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2016
Mmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeee ppppllllllzzzz I need more!(::)(::) *_* ('-') I nnneeeddd
KE12 chapter 3 . 11/30/2016
Well you have caught a new reader for your story . I'm curious about two things you have done though, in my primary story in this universe I too have made Vikings stronger than what a natural human could achieve (albeit subtly) and it is about to come up but the premise of this story is similar to a small detail revealed in an upcoming chapter.

So I'm curious how you take this forward and what you do with your story.

Anyway good start, I look forward to ch4
LucyBC1990 chapter 3 . 11/29/2016
Why am I not surprised that Hiccups ideas to help Elsa has something to do with dragons?
Of cause Stoick is annoyed with the packing of Elsas stuff. Its unbelievable what junk some people are packing when going on a trip. Im certain Stoick helped loading the ship not only to blow up stream, but to show off as well.
I image how hard it was to find a crew for the journey. Job Description: You mighty king is searching for brave and loyal man to accompany his beloved daughter on her journey to the barbaric archipelago. Columbus would have had similar problems.
Elsa dont want to form a crush on Hiccup, I think its already too late for that.
Year Toothless is back. I would have loved to see the flabbergasted faces from the Arendelle ship as Hiccup claimed the mast. Just the Viking way. What I miss a limb! Since when?
Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2016
OK go go go go wright faster! Plzzzzzzzzzz me wanty
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
Uuuuummmmmmm I think its the Norns but yes go on
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
I gotta say that this is interesting. Is this going to move forward with race to the edge? Then I take it Elsa will tame the snow wraith or something. Either way, this is nice and I hope you update.
LucyBC1990 chapter 2 . 11/23/2016
Just wondering is a crew of four people not a little scant for a traveling chief and his son on a diplomatic journey? Personally I would have not chosen Mulch and Bucket for my escort. To be frankly they are not the brightest one around.
Of cause Hiccup would go in an instead in an engineering mode if he sees a caravel. Better Agnarr isnt letting him near any of his ships, (is the sentence correct like this, somehow it feels wrong?) or else Hiccup will there it apart plank by plank, to have a lock at the construction.
Hiccup should be glad for the odd locks the people are giving them, it could be worse, they could run and scream bloody murder. Respect for the guards they keep their cool.
Agnarr should make a metaphor out of it, there are Vikings in our throne room. Maybe as expression for being overrun. Im sure Adnarr just feel like this. Its a little strange that Hiccups full name arent stucking Agnarr and Iduna at odd. Or maybe the whole situation is just too odd for them that this little detail isnt so important.
Good that Agnarr had no interest in ruling over Berk. Not sure if he would made it.
That’s a nice idea to safe Agnarr and Idunas live. Sometimes just moments made the deferens between live and death.
Iduna must be really desperate to send her chilled away with some strange Vikings she doesn’t know. And should they not ask Stoick first bevor they deceit to have Elsa with them? Or is Agnarr is just doing that in that moment Hiccup is speaking with Elsa.
And where the hell is the decency lady? Seriously in that time you cannot put a young woman and a handsome young man into the same room without a decency lady! But I like the impact Hiccup has on Elsa, he may be not the classic prince in shining armor, but he can clearly smile like one.
Im curious what Hiccups ideas to Elsas problem could be.
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