Awsome shot

Marco is just being selfish, wants to have both and both girls should settle for that? It would be better to stay alone.

Two words. LOVE. IT. This perfectly captured their emotions after the Bon Bon incident, and I greatly appreciate that this revolves around Marco's crush on Star rather than the other way around, cause I see Star's POV waaaaaaay more often :3

This was the best, great job for your first, I hope you make more.

Amazing story! Keep up the great work friend :)

This is probably my favorite Bon Bon aftermath fic, because it doesnt cast either as being in the total wrong, and Star admitted to spying. This was cute, and I hope one day you make a morning after sequel

AAAAAHHHHHHHHH IIIII LOOOOOVVEE IIIIITTT
PLLEEEEAAAASE I NEED MOOOORREE
Seriously though, this was nice, kudos to you. And after that season finally, I lied in bed wondering what to do with my life for a good 5-10 minutes.

Thank you so much for writing this! It was beautiful! I needed this after that season finale 7_7
So again: bautiful story! I hope you keep writing for this fandom :)

I feel like I get lots of reviews but then whenever I say something nobody else comments anymore. Strange . . . I

I know that this is only the winter finale. Sorry I didn't mention that earlier! I will change that if I remember. A lot of people brought that up, so I thought I'd correct that. Anyways, I'm really glad people enjoyed this!

The season isn't over. There's just a two month hiatus.

This was your first Starco fic? My goodness and golly gee this was beauty incarante. Sure it was sappy, a tad far fetched, but I'd be preaching to the choir if I advised against complete deviation from the shambles that canon has left us with. This was well composed, sweet, poignant. Easy to read, easy to love. Yes it holds my fancy and my praise and indeed my furthur glance to any other stories you wish to grace us with in future. Despite appearences I have been a part of this fandom for a very very long time. (August 2014 for all dated purposes) I have seen the rise and fall of AUs and Authors. The first fanfic and the last headcanon made before the show premiered. From WattPad horror stories to My New Wand and back again. It takes something really special to garner my interest. This definitely qualifies as something really special.

It was good and as it should be. Long live Starco!

Don't worry...my fellow starco fan ;;
The Blood Moon will watch over the ship
Ahem, maybe Star will realize how she actually felt towards Marco. It's so clear of the jealousy she has.

Not bad. Lots of emotion here. I do hope Star and Marco eventually get together.
Yeah, Star pretty much lost every which way in that episode. I feel bad for her. And I do wonder what the blood moon's appearance foreshadowed. So much heavy stuff in the second part.
But fortunately, I don't think this is the season finale, but the finale for the rest of the year. I believe there's more episodes this season later to come, not to mention a whole season after that.
Anyway, you did good here, especially for your first time. No need to worry. :)