| Reviews for Harmony vs Toad Face |
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   tied chapter 11 . 10/2/2019 I have enjoyed reading this story and look forward to seeing where you takeep me and your other readers. |
| lokyyt chapter 11 . 6/29/2019 more please keep typing and please reply |
| HarmonyEveryday chapter 11 . 6/21/2019 I just reviewed Hermione’s Harry, loving it and begging for more. Then I looked at your author page and found this, that there is a sequel so will be reading this now. Thank you for sharing. Will be watching for your updates! |
| brendan chapter 5 . 5/19/2019 Ooh missed a little somthing with my review thought about it until i posted it. You want a hilarisch scene the potter parents meet the weasleys for certain molly/ginny, and tell them off for there delusions and parenting skill about there daughter. XD |
| brendan chapter 9 . 5/19/2019 Hahaha my god you write so bloody awesome it's enjoyable and sensuel and so normal and how h/hr are. (considering you make them 2 horny teenagers haha) witch might add you miss a position in there love making (dog style cause there lions). I don't know if you had any plans with house/nobel potter in the story, cause then there more things he didn't know about cause of dumbles. hmm dumbles get's off pretty easy you know, snape get's his arse kicked but dumbles is hardly screamed at. When the potters hear neather dumbles or the supposed uncles had let harry know about his position in the world they wouldn't be happy. For that matter are you really let them hide? sure might be good against voldy but they could change this with the toad and fudge and stuff. |
| VidiAlair chapter 11 . 4/29/2019 Waiting patiently for Harmony Reimagined. I hope you can surprise us with a publication / update soon. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/10/2019 Good |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/3/2019 Good |
| aradia1967 chapter 11 . 3/25/2019 loved this story hopefully you will post the updated version soon |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/14/2019 Great good |
| alix33 chapter 9 . 3/13/2019 “goodbye” should be one word. “lacklustre professor”, not “lack luster professor”. “hooked her les around Harry’s”, not “hooked her legs around Harrys”. “boys’ dormitories”, not “boy’s dormitories”. |
| alix33 chapter 8 . 3/13/2019 “upbringing” should be one word. As should “floodgate”. ‘daughter-in-law” should be hyphenated. Did you mean for James to say “expletive here and there”, since “expletive” basically means “swear word”, while “explicative” means “explanation”? Harry’s tattoo and his proposing to Hermione with the aid of it is/was/will be the sweetest thing. |
| alix33 chapter 7 . 3/13/2019 “strong-willed” should be hyphenated. I’m more curious about the jeans Lily and Hermione might have purchased than the lingerie they definitely did. And I’m very curious about Harry’s first ink. |
| alix33 chapter 6 . 3/13/2019 Yay! for Lily having kicked Snape in the meat and two veg. I love every syllable of Harry’s rant at Dumbles on behalf of Sirius and about his own alleged childhood at the Dursleys. I yearn with every fibre of my being for the millisecond in which karma gets unleashed on Dumbles for his having “wronged nearly everyone in this room”. I agree with and approve wholeheartedly of Hermione’s glare at Dumbles just now. |
| alix33 chapter 5 . 3/13/2019 “heart-warming” should be hyphenated. |
