hope to read more soon

pretty cool fic

So if Jaune getting his aura activated early weakened him is he permanently weaker than he should be

Nice fic eggxelent

"I didn't get to *choose*." Not "chose".

Just a heads up.

"His father, Jasper, was a killed warrior."

Not sure if this is a typo and you meant to say "skilled warrior". Or maybe it's intentional and he really is dead. Just something I wanted to point out that might confuse people.

Really intriguing story you have written here. I'm a total Lancaster dude myself, though I do like all Jaune ships respectively actually, but Jaune and Ruby just do it for me the most. Thus I thank you for your effort in making a Lancaster fic that's apparently a Harry Potter-ish setting mixed with Bloodborne maybe.
This is a great fic and I hope to see more soon. As a writer myself I understand the difficulty in creating the story, but the chaps could be a bit longer imo.
Thumbs up!

Did you get the plot idea from Seventh Son?

In that case, jaune is the seventh son isn't he? So he's gonna be pretty strong.

Let me ask you a question. The womanss voice is summer right ? She somehow fused with the "evil", to let the others then contain her, am I right ?

Huh, I'm intrigued. This was pretty good and I love how you explored what Qrow and the staff felt about Summer's death, it was neat. As for the ending, I'm guessing the person in the pit is Salem, no surprise from me there. Anyways, I'll follow this to see what up. Until then, have a good day.

NOOOO NOT SUMMER

Interesting story.

But how is Ozpin of average height? He's 6'6.

Salem?

is this going to be lancaster?
good chapter. im not really good at criticism so iwont do it.
good luck!