This is great story so far. Great job

I love how you are writing out their relationship! Of course Zoro would have any sense of direction when it comes to relationships.

I'm really surprised they didn't notice her original outfit on the floor, and crocodile had been on top of her. Very compromising positions all around. Also surprised Luffy didn't go all big bro over that.

I binge read the Kidd Cafe story you advertised. My word was it so good! Sorry I commented here instead of there, I had to read it on my phone.

At long last, Hawke is at peace with herself. A great finish to this arc and well done mixing in new elements without taking any of the tale away. Glad to see you back and looking forward to the Water 7 arc, my personal favorite.

So I just binge read this entire story and it was so good! I love Hawke and Luffy's relationship and her interactions with Zoro are so completely adorable!

omg love it please update

Nice chapter, good to see you still at it. A bit of a mellow chapter but it really suits the mood and gives the reader the organize what's happened up till now before the next adventure begins. Nice work clarifying Hawke's story and opening up new questions to explore. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I really love this story, I have been following here and on Ao3. I also read the story before this re write and I have to say you have improved vastly!

Wow! I read the first version, and I loved it, and now I’ve read the rewrite and it’s even better! Your writing has really improved, this story is sooooo good. I can’t wait to read more!

I still remember when you decided to rewrite this story and I was disappointed because I was so in love with the original but you have truly outdone yourself! The character development of Hawke and her growing relationships with the crew is something you’ve captured beautifully. I can’t wait to see how she will act now that the necklace is destroyed and how her and Zoro will interact as time goes on.

So concludes the second arc of Hawke's tale. Interesting twist their with Wiper getting to ring the bell and a sudden bloom of Hawke's courage. She suffered not from a lack of trust, but a lack of faith in trust. You really made setting her demons to rest in a truly god-level event, well done. By freeing her from the doubts and worries she carried she can move forward a truly develop with the crew. Finding that faith will due well in helping her bond with Robin latter as her past comes back to haunt her. Really looking forward to your work on the Water Seven arc (it's my personally favorite). Keep it up!

Nice work, missed getting to see god Enel loose it when fighting Luffy. Hawke is getting there with accepting herself, hopefully she'll finally be free of her inner demons and truey be part of the Straw Hats. Going through her doubts has been useful for character build, but I think its time she start really being a member of the crew. As for your suggestions on side stories or chapters, I'm thinking something along the lines of having Hawke travel with either Zoro or Robin to finally destroy the black pearl and in turn end her visions of Zhivago (he's getting to be a pain). Their were several anime only arcs and movies that technically take place between Skypia and Water 7, you could add any of those or create your own. Just make sure it flows well with the original cannon and you might even more fans for your creativity. Whatever you choose I'm still looking forward to how this adventure plays out!

Awwwh. Hawke! /3

Welcome back! Great week for fanfiction, so many people getting new chapters out. An unexpected twist with this chapter. Hawke's really flipping between lucid and hallucinating here, to the point she can't separate the two. It seems the lightning fried her already fragile psychic and made it hard to tell what's going on. I Think the pearl is the key to her letting go of her nightmares, destroying it should give her back control. You really do the unstable mind well here, so much so that even I'm getting confused (and I know this scene well). Her insecurities are starting to cause problems so hopefully she'll find a solution soon. Keep up the good work!