Reviews for Ben 10: Alien League
quangnguyentran720 chapter 2 . 7/13
Please update
Chalanka chapter 3 . 6/27
Come on and update this story, oh and i really want Ben have a harem
Guest chapter 3 . 6/22
Please update hurty
Guest chapter 3 . 6/15
Please continue thì story please
B10H chapter 3 . 6/5
Could you make a lot girl love ben
Guest chapter 3 . 6/5
Please update
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28
Contonue please
Amit Barabi chapter 3 . 5/24
I have a little experience as a beta reader so I would love to help.
as for their hero names...
Ben: Omni-Master.
Gwen: Lucky Girl.
Kevin: Mecha-Bsorption.
I hope you have a plan for this story, since you basically took the story Ben 10 Unlimited and added Gwen and Kevin I would suggest the each one of them will go to a therapy under Black Canary and while Ben would join the League after a little while, Gwen and Kevin will take their time, Gwen would try to master her magic to a higher level so when she goes back to being a hero she will not let anyone die and Kevin will take the longest because he wants to be normal for once.
I would also suggest that Kevin will use his energy and or DNA absorption on small scales so he could do more than punching.
Gwen could try to use magic to resurrect Max but it wouldn't work.
and don't let Ship or Verdona be part of this, Ben Gwen and Kevin have each other so every other character from their home universe will make the lost a lot smaller.
basically each one of them should have their own arc about the lost and develop in their own way, Ben's arc will be about keeping fighting to become part of something bigger, Gwen's arc is about getting stronger so she will not let anyone else die, and Kevin's arc is about depression and questioning his place as a hero.
you can do whatever you want but I believe each one of them should be affected by their lost in their own way, so they will not feel like shadows of each other.
Drago chapter 3 . 5/23
Ben: X (Roman number of 10)
Gwen: mystic
Kevin: element man
quangnguyentran720 chapter 3 . 5/23
I think Ben hero name should be alien force
Guest chapter 3 . 5/23
A name for ben knight.
A good name for gwen srar magic.
A name for kevin changes
Sakra95 chapter 3 . 5/23
Make it that Ben and the others did not lose everything. That troupe is completely overused and has become annoying. For Ben's hero name I suggest Omni-Shift.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/23
For ben ultimate.
For gwen magic girl.
For kevin absorcion
Maximum Rhapsody chapter 3 . 5/22
The truth, you could change that Ben's group did not lose everything that matters to them, since it is very used in the stories where Ben 10 goes to the Marvel or DC universe, you could also add stories from other animated series and movies from DC and Adapt them in this story where they involve not only the Justice League, but also the Teen Titans among other characters such as Trigon, John Constantine, Jason Todd, Dr. Fate, Suicide Squad, etc. On the possible Villains that Kevin and Gwen can face, Kevin could face villains and criminals from Gotham City like Bane, Killer Croc, Deadshot, he could even face some members of the Suicide Squad with some allies to help him, with Gwen he could face magical beings like Klarion, Trigon, Blood Brother, etc, I would also like you to include the Ben 10 villains in that world like Eon, Vilgax, Albedo, etc. And I don't know if you are interested in the idea of putting an enemy at a multiverse level like The Anti-Monitor and adding other universes to face it like Marvel, Fullmetal Alchemist, Transformers, Avatar the last Airbender, Voltron: Legendary Defender, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, My Hero Academia, Inuyasha, Kill la Kill, Akame ga Kill, etc.
Starlord Master chapter 3 . 5/22
It's all good.
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