| Reviews for Unkillable |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2019 You do realize that by the end of shiiuden, Naruto could move at speeds FASTER than light. Or at least he can react at the speed of light. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/23/2018 what abut tako-sensei what does it means? |
WolfGirl1 chapter 6 . 3/2/2017 Is it this Kobayashi guy? |
WolfGirl1 chapter 3 . 2/28/2017 IS KOROSENSIE MINOTO NAMAZAKI, NARUTO'S FATHER! |
PainX65 chapter 6 . 1/20/2017 Good chapter. Looking forward to the next one! |
AkitaWF chapter 6 . 1/3/2017 OMG I LOVE THIS STORYYY! AND THE PLOTLINE AND THE CHARACTERS AND BASICALLY EVERYTHING! Plus, you're a really good writer!:D Keep it up! :) :) |
SadisticOrange chapter 5 . 12/11/2016 Bad boy Sasuke at play here huh? I have a feeling that the sweet tooth is a clue hmmmm. It could also be a Red Herring... Oh my, this is indeed a difficult one to choose. What a conundrum. |
PainX65 chapter 5 . 12/10/2016 Nice chapter, can't wait till they find out about his other weaknesses and his other abilities. |
PainX65 chapter 4 . 12/4/2016 A nice chapter, I enjoyed it. I wonder if Korosensei was originally a missing nin? Some more thoughts could be Shisui, Rin, Kakashi (I can't really see Kakashi or Rin), it could also be Zabuza, Haku or someone from the Kaguya (Bone), Hozuki clans or a complete shot in the dark and highly unlikely Orochimaru. I doubt it will be Rin due to gender and Orochimaru would definitely be the creator instead, and someone already said Kakashi and didn't get it. You've also said we were really close. So it's not Minato, Kakashi, Kabuto, Itachi or Obito...so that means close to one of them. So Rin (If you pull some gender things), Shisui, and even though I can't see the snake, I'll also say the snake. You also mentioned a deadline and the chunin exams? Must be either a big deadline or they go to watch one. I'm definitely thinking to much about this but I'm looking forward to the reveal and making me go 'OH IT WAS [NAME], I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN!'. Also...Okuda Manami? Ah, so she's in this story or was it a random coincidence. I'm going to wait and be surprised by who Koro-sensei truly is. |
SadisticOrange chapter 3 . 11/26/2016 Cool. Nice to see a childish Naruto. Koro-Sensei is either Minato Namikaze or Kakashi Hatake. I would've said Jiraiya but Jiraiya would've rather use his new found speed for perving. Oh, and the Shodaime. Never forget the Shodaime. |
SadisticOrange chapter 2 . 11/26/2016 Still brilliant as always. I like how you used this chapter to help set the tone for the future chapters. |
PainX65 chapter 3 . 11/22/2016 This was a heart warming chapter, good to see Naruto grow due to Koro-sensei's actions. Looking forward to the next chapter. Also I wonder how the story will change in the classroom with the new improved and less orange Naruto. Wonder the reactions to his change of outfit too. Right now I'm seeing Naruto similar to that of Nagisa and I wonder if Korosensei will go black face and use that everyone but them threat due to any demon bullying or sacrificing (like the grenade scene) one of the classmates. Now I'm thinking Jiraiya but I'm not sure and there are plenty of Kiri shinobi too...It's hard to tell who it is. Enjoying the story, looking forward to chapter four. |
PainX65 chapter 2 . 11/21/2016 Like the chapter, my first three thoughts on who it could are Kabuto, Itachi and Obito, but I have no idea. I do have to wonder, will if Naruto would go one-tailed or if he is like Nagisa when it comes to bloodlust. With his background he could learn to read people like Nagisa. Wonder if Sasuke will grow because of Tako-sensei. |
SadisticOrange chapter 1 . 11/20/2016 ...Pure genius. A combination I've never expected. I tip my hat to you sire. |
PainX65 chapter 1 . 11/20/2016 I like it, looking forward to how Koro-sensei or Tako-sensei helps the kids grow and how they are affected by him. |