Who cares if it's cheesy!? What you want is more important.
Also, my subtle attempt of an answer to your question deserves a slap to the face...
I've said it once and I'll say it again: don't push yourself to the limit! You are a great writer in the works.
Even though I won't pretend that I'm some sort of expert, I can see that.
Sure, it's good to try harder, but don't write things in one go, save and continue later.
Also my punny attempt, is not more important than you, I phrased it that way.

I hated Memory Blank as well. But my least favorite episode, was Control Freaks. Nice romance by the way. And Jeez, 2 in the morning. I can't even stay up until then. Can't wait for the next chapter.
And when you publish your book can I get the name? I would love to read it.

I really like this write a lot more of it please.3

I have an idea! Maybe Cartoon Land is the flipside of our real world, like callifornia is Japanifornia from my newest fandom The Phoenix Wright game series, And the ghost zone is flipside of the flipside, where not only you go when you die, but where all rejected/never made cartoons live.
Also, to enter the ghost zone you have to go through a challenge in Cartoon land, And by enter, i mean take permanent residence there.
So maybe Dabria died or some shit like that, in a come, life threathning injury, so it is her joutney to the afterlife.
Or everything except the last part.

OOOOOOOOOOOO

ENTAH THE GHOST ZONE
THE
GHOST
ZONE

OOOOOOOOOOO

-JF

I AM THE BOX GHOST! BEWARE! XD

P. S. In case you can't tell, I like this idea a LOT. :)

*Aplausos eternos*