Your characterisation was perfect, and it felt like Shiro and Pidge getting married, not generic at all.

Heh. I love this whole story. It's so sweat and and cute! I. Want. That. Ring.

I can't believe I haven't seen this before! This is absolutely adorable and hilarious, and I love love love the way you write the relationship between Pidge and Shiro. I love the family bond between all the paladins and the two Alteans. You are my favorite Voltron writer, and I'm so glad that you wrote this. Thank you!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! The cuteness is too much to handle!
(Dies from cuteness overload.)

That was oven fluffier, cuter and sweeter than the previous story! Please tell me you have more of this!
And lance as wedding planner bridezilla got my laughing for sooooo long

I really like all the friendships you manage to portray, and how each character's thoughts are narrated. The biggest thing that needs work is the tenses-too much moving back and forth between past and present tenses. Also, the word "wraps" was used twice in reference to Shay's arm.

Yessssss... I still don't know if I ship Shiro and Pidge but your work is absolutely lovely. I love it.