I want to like this but I just cant... I mean jaune is basically being pushed to go to beacon out of conveniences sake it's just disappointing

Nice story btw those miracles remind me of dark souls

Aw man... Binge read this story and I loved it so far. Would this be updated or did someone else wrote an adopted story?

Jaune doesn't like that Ozpin wasn't upfront especially when the Black Night is getting closer. As the four kingdoms celebrate, Shiloh stands alone against the Grimm Swarm.

A shame this is where is currently ends...

I have a hard time beleiving Pyrrha would beat jaune... Her fighting style is extensively Flashy And while Strong shes more built for Speed, Not Strength, How the HELL would she overpower Jaune who would likely be trained in Cold CUT Efficient Grappling.

And Already Im disliking the idea of him not Being armored enough to at least BLOCK Goodbitch Crop... Really... He HAS AURA IN SPADES, if she cant overwhelm his aura her attacks should be USELESS...

Hope for more

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Its always nice to see someone wondering about how Yang destroyed Junior's club but never seemed to get any repercussions. Some stories I've read also talk about team RWBY's highway chase of Roman in the Paladin and how that had to cause significant collateral damage. Once again canon just skips any punishment they got from taking things into their own hands.

Glad someone finally outright mentions why Pyrrha's attitude never made sense in canon.

Thank you! I love that view about Yang! Ever since I saw that trailer, I always wondered why yang didn't go to prison for that. Just because Junior IS a criminal, doesn't mean he can be arrested with not evidence or without committing a crime. Junior basically just said no to Yang, she threatened him, and when his bodyguards, People he hired to protect him, tried to protect him, Yang destroyed his club and beat all his employees up. How the hell is Yang the good guy here? Junior wasn't doing anything wrong, (well, nothing illegal) so why can't he press charges?

Jaune makes a note how his aura protects him from splinters, but he doesn't know what aura is. He even makes a distinction that his culture calls aura something different. If you going for third person omniscient, then more power to ya. Sorry, was just confused

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MUST READ MORE A DISTRUSTING JAUNE ESPECIALLY FROM THE TEACHERS IS AWESOME! THOUGH I EXPECT A CHARACTER CHANGE FOR HIM IF YOU WILL

This story of yours is a good concept. I really like your take on Jaune, and how is upbringing as a Templar changed his character.

I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the next chapters.

There are many reasons why you SHOULD NOT DO what osbin did. If you want a real world example i got 2. Hitler and the amazon rain forest. There you go.