Pls update soon I love this story

This story is great so far, you have a very good grip on the characters and they both feel completely like themselves, I'm really loving this premise and looking forward to seeing how the massive change of Kirito meeting Silica on the first floor and (seemingly) permanently joining up with him is going to potentially radically change the rest of the series...always been a real sucker for a good AU, and this is definitely going to be one, I can tell. And plus, it has Silica, and what's not to like about Silica? :P

This looks really good.

*blink* wow, the quality between the first and second chapter just dropped drastically.
Let me explain: while you did give a cute fluffy chapter, I feel like it was quite short and choppy. This conversation sorta felt rushed and out of the blue. I feel like parts of this conversation would be coming up in a chapter four rather than a chapter two. Especially the parts about Kirito's family. So be aware about how you pace things and plot them out.
Also try to give direction in your chapter. Are they just standing around or...well...where are they?

Anyways, keep up the writing!
UCCMaster

Interesting story idea. I assume this is going to be a Silica sibling/shipper story where she's bemoaning her onii-sama's density. One thing I'd reccomend for an imouto fic is to push the usage of Japanese titles and sufixes. This will raise Silica's cute little sisterness by 9000 and is part of the uniquely Japanese loli kawaii imouto Chan story style.

Keep up the goood work!

UCCMaster