I remember loving your original one shot, and I’m so happy to see that you decided to expand it!

This is a good fic, and I like how you are handling the two instead of one hosts. I’m really looking forward to seeing how Shadi reacts to this, and Kaiba!

Well done, I hope to one day see you return to this!

Great stuff

When I read Chapter 1, I made a promise to review each and every chapter as I read, and thus, here I am. This was a great chapter, and I loved the spin you put on canon events. This is a very interesting fanfic, and I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY want to see where this goes. I have ranked it in my top 5 fanfics that I have EVER read, and it has helped me get through a really long and hard day at work, and for that I thank you. My life has been so stressful right now, and this is helping me not get bogged down by it, it's THAT good. So I'm asking, I'm BEGGING you, please don't let this gather dust, forgotten amongst the last pages of a fanfiction search, because I want to see where this goes, I want to see how it ends, I want to read something that makes me have a smile on my face every time I look at it. You are a fantastic writer, and if you need to take your time, then take your time. I'll try and be patient, but no matter how long it takes, I'll be here to read the next chapter. This is a promise. See you then. :D

It's so nice to see the characters finally put the pieces together. And the police are actually doing their jobs?! *gasp*
So yeah, with every chapter I read, I'm liking this story more and more. I look forward to seeing what comes next. :D

Hey don't worry about it, you did great! :)
I actually like this particular chapter a lot, and it actually shows what people would do in real life if this happened: start looking for Atem. Why did that never happen in the manga? So I'm really glad you addressed it here. It makes me REALLY excited to see what happens next. Followed and Favorited. :D

Another good chapter :)
In all honesty, doing it this way actually irons out one of the things I noticed about the original manga: his appearance times were wildly inconsistent. That sometimes he came out to play a game while other times, where it seemed necessary, he didn't. So thanks for that. :)

This is extremely interesting. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it :)

wow.. i love this chapter.. I hope to read another update from you soon~

Oh I can't hope for more. I love this really and we haven't gotten to the dueling portion...makes me wonder how that's going to work as since they swap it around Yugi is going to duel when he can't just swap out...and Anzu may get more into dueling hm...

I’m so glad you updated this story! It feels good to revisit Season 0. Glad to see Tristen (Honda) finally being part of the group, but I do like how he’s suspicious of Yugi and his “weirdness” ;D.
Anyways like I said I’m glad you updated the story. I can’t wait to read more of it, but don’t feel like you have to rush. Take your time and post when you can :D

I had forgotten how wonderful Atem delivering karma to jerkasses like that teacher felt. I'm curious how far Honda's suspicions will go before the Death-T arc.

This was a very good chapter. I can't believe that you paired Yugi and Tea together. That's really sweet. By the way, can you please follow and favorite me and can you please PM me back as soon as you get this. Thanks.

The last two chapter titles were a blast! YES people are noticing the weird coincidences and stuff happening around Yugi and Anzu. Considering Shadi hasn't popped up yet I say it's gonna get even more weird and even more wild!

Ah yes the pre-duelist kingdom arc had such a good horror feeling to it. The two voices overlapping is indeed scary or outlandish from the bullies and jerks's point of view.

Okay... this really too dark~~
Since it not illusion..

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