can i ask? can leona optain solar eclipse or lunar eclipse skin? in next chapters?

continue in story pls

continue pls

this chapter is amazing please continue writing

Definitely one of the better Familiar of Zero crossovers.
I like that you are improving Louise, too many leave her be the same way as canon despite different familiars and stories.
Do you ever plan to continue this story?

It's on her chest, not in... Louise wouldn't be that reasonable and Kirche wouldn't just charge to kiss someone on the first meet so I won't be continuing to read this as I'm sure more and more errors will show.

wow, very nice.
Leona took that pretty well, and you've made Louise a nicer person which is great since they're all brats in canon.

God I laughed so hard

Well I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I wish I had read it sooner. I just hope it continues and doesn't join the other dead stories log there. Good luck author the story has potential.

CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE

nice story, hope you come back to it eventually

Ok can you please cut it out with the ellipses. You're making them sound like William Shatner.

So third arc is about done it seems

I won't deny it, I am very surprised and happy for the return of this story. Let us hope it doesn't takes do long to continue.

As for the story itself... It was surprisingly short, so not much to say, other than Vi is awesome no matter the universe, makes wish really hard Cait was around as well. Bit the whole weakening eclipse came kind of nowhere.

Wow I'm so glad I found this story! It's been amazing so far and I can't wait for the upcoming battle.

Don't forget about this fic.