Lovely! What a perfect fic! 3

OH. MY. GOD.

Easily the best fic I have ever read so far & trust me - I've read a lot! It's always hard for me to keep interest in fics and straight away you drew me in. You're language, punctuation, grammar etc is amazing. The story had my heart sinking - me laughing - me smiling - repeat. It was hot, yet sad, yet funny. Something I've never experience in a fic before... Total genius. I am so glad to have read this 3

Sorry for the ramble!

Aww, that was so awesome. Thank you very much. I really enjoyed this!

WOW. That's definitely the first thing that came to mind after reading this amazing work! You have quite a way with words, an impressive vocabulary but not so much that it makes me want to whip out a dictionary... I think you captured Cloud and Zack's feelings in a relateable and accurate way.

I enjoyed the way you set up conversations and managed to include not only dalogue but the feelings throughout- Cloud's, mainly. this is definitely one of the top two best fanfics I've ever read concerning this pairing and I'll be waiting for any future updates!

Keep up the amazing writing! D

I find your writing style quite fascinating. The many details that you include gives it a sense of realism that I seldom find in other fics. Even though you wrote in the third person, I noticed you hardly ever describe him as 'Cloud did this', but leaned more towards 'he did this', which seemed to make it more personal. I loved reading it.

This was a very interesting one-shot. The writing style was a bit wierd and different, and a bit difficult to understand. However, I am sure that was done on purpose, to show Cloud's troubled state. And it was done quite well. I loved how you wrote Zack and Cloud's relationship. You did them justice. Overall, excellent one-shot.

I loved the detail, thanks for writing it.

It almost seemed as if the fic didn't /quite/ have a focus. That Cloud's mind was meandering aimlessly through. . . everything. But, I kind of liked it like that. I'm not sure if that's how I was supposed to feel but it did.

I like the subtlety of SephirothCloud and ZackAerith. It made the ZackCloud so much more. . . real? Tangible? I can't find the right words. Then again, my mind is like totally fried after reading this. And fried as in a good way.

This fic was lovely and nice and long. I'm a little late but awesome job! )

I already read so much, already felt so much, and yet I can still be so truly moved.

All the things you wrote felt deeply right : doubts, angst, worries and answers.

I'm not usually fond of fics that reflect some of the real life because most of the time I'm afraid of being disappointed, bored or unmoved. Sometimes I am.

But while reading Fear, I began to hear a odd sound in myself, not quite a sob, not quite a heartbeat.

An echo, a ringing thing that slowly brought me to the edge ; the edge of emotion, the edge of tears, the edge of understanding.

I amaze me that you can wrote so OC characters like Cloud and that I could still find so much of myself in him.

Thank you.

Very good - in character and nicely done. Well developed and interesting. I like the flower symbolism. Hope you write more about these characters! Thanks for listing it :)

...I adore you. :D Just love the way you peice things together in the end with every part and to the very end. You have pretty writing. :D So... Please write more of my beloved couple [ZACK/CLOUD]. :D

PS. You made my day :D

Absolutely gorgeous. One of the best written pieces I've ever read, I have to admit...

Sorry. Dodgy short review T_T My apologies for that... I'm pretty much incoherent right now though...

~Tally~

Holy... crap... *_* So beautiful! Oh my God, I forced myself to get to the end in one day and I'm glad of that. This is probably the prettiest ZackCloud fic I've read. It's just so... touching. Oh my God, I don't know what else to say... fabulous job.

Very nicely done.

This was very good! The part that stood out the most to me had to be the dream. The one that fortells Zack's death. That dream really emphasized all of the other forshadowing and symbolism in the story! I really enjoyed reading this.