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Good chapter, pretty interesting what I'm reading so far, looks pretty good. So Vault 114 had its own little secrets beyond cryo-pods, huh? Time will what might happen when that stuff leaks into the outside world. It'll be interesting to see what happens either way.

Anyhow, should let you know that I'm starting to work on my Game of Thrones/Fallout: New York idea that I told you about the other night and I'm doing some research on New York and the surrounding area of New York and even working on some factions and key regions like for example Coney Island will become a Slaver stronghold and the New York Metropolitan Museum of Art will become Met City, there'll also be a settlement in Central Park in the remains of Central Park Zoo. Some factions that will feature or make a comeback will be Hannibal Hamlin and his Abolitionists from Fallout 3, the Regulators from the same game, I've told you about how the Enclave and the Institute form an alliance together, the Brotherhood of Steel will definitely show up along with the Railroad and the Legion may appear making their base in Long Island or Upstate New York.

And of course you know I'm going to use Aegon VI/Young Griff as the central protagonist and I was struck with the idea that when he and the crew of the Shy Maid land in the Fallout universe, they land on the shores of the Nuka Island and are captured by the Slavers and Aegon is separated from his friends/family/mentors and he is then freed from the Railroad and Abolitionists and works with them to get his friends back. I even had the idea that the leader of the Slavers even takes Blackfyre which gives Aegon even more reason to go after the Nuka Island Slavers. Whaddya think? Let me in either a PM or X-Box Party chat and if you have any ideas for characters for any faction I've mentioned, feel free to suggest :-D

Anyways, good chapter and I look forward to seeing more :-D

Ouch i know that feeling man my old laptop use to just kack out on me at random times and close everything down after i boot it back up.

I had doubts about this story, but you sir/mam. Just had me digging deep into this and full on invested, when is Nate gonna mention Nora’s death or is she dead?

Good chapter and I do hope to see the next chapter soon, but take your time with it, good things take time to ripen.

Also, I've been thinking, I recently pre-ordered Fallout 76, just to see if it is any good and I'm thinking that I could write a crossover with Highschool of the Dead for it. This is a maybe, not definite and it depends if FO76 is any good or not so we'll have to wait until the game comes out or at least have a go of the beta and I've got some ideas for it :-)

I'd be glad to discuss the details with you and even share some rough scenes, but scenes might be a while off as there isn't a lot of content storywise I've seen for FO76 but what footage I've seen does give me some ideas for potential rough drafts.

Anyways, good chapter and I hope to see more soon :-D

Keep up the good work,

Angry lil' elf.

I love this dude! You are friggin awesome! I hope you write another chapter soon because I am ‘dying’ to see what happens next! :) Although I do wonder, like what will you do with Danse and the BOS if and when they’re encountered? How will the protagonists deal with the other factions of the wild wasteland that is the commonwealth? Please nuke the institute, they have it coming so bad.

Good chapter you have here. I'm impressed with what you've done so far even though it is a little rushed, but it was still good. I apologise in advance if I haven't updated my own HOTD/Falout story but I will work on it as soon as possible, I've just been busy with school and work as well as some of my other projects but I will try to get out another chapter for it.

I'll get in contact with you asap and I also have a couple of ideas to run by regarding some past ideas, some current ones and some of my planned ones. Will talk to you later :-D

Keep up the good work!

Angry lil' elf.

Yay you's back in action my dude hope you keep making some more, like I said if you ever need a OC I got the the perfect merc

Dear Author please make more of this I quite very much enjoy it. I pray for it to become more fun and less of an annoyance. Bless you.

Dear Author what you have done here is actually quite brilliant and genius. Please continue and keep up the good work.

You my kind sir just earned a follower also I can't help but imagine one of the cast members being that one sarcastic jerk and when that happens in gonna love this story some more. Also if you ever need a oc I'm the guy

Really really good more

Good shit and don't let anyone tell you different.!

Love the story so far I hope you continue it. I was wondering if you can look at a Youtube Channel called ShoddyCast and look at a series called The Storyteller: FALLOUT you will love it and it might give you some idea's for your story. It has more in depth into the fallout universe history with a interesting character telling it. But that is a story for another day.

Okay I've change my mind. As of right now I'm giving this fic the Garo fanfiction treatment meaning I will review every chapter that comes out instead of one review per three chapters. This chapter was a good start to the apocalypse and the what the characters were doing before that is funny to read. However after reading the chapter; three questions pop into my head.
1. Will Fransworth will still be around after 200 years?
2. Will Koichi Shido become a Ghoul? (preferably a sane ghoul because it is more satisfying)
3. How would the characters get out of Cryo next chapter? I hope it will be creative.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

ReviewerDWJ