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im disturbed

This was phenomenal! One of the best fics I’ve read

Really loved this story! Great work :) 3!

Viktor's hair isn't blonde.

Really detailed! Nice!

Hi, I read your author's note and I have to say, do not make any changes because someone wasn't happy. It is your own work and you put in the effort and creativity to make it your own - I don't write fanfiction any more. It's been almost 10 years since I have (yes I'm old and I still hide under the covers reading it from time to time but...) anyway, I had bad experiences from receiving comments in the past and it put a real downer on my work but you just have to rise above it all and just do you :) unless J took the A/N completely wrong then I'm sorry... but continue to write! The only thing anyone can do when it comes to writing is improve :3 x

It was Gucci

Awwwwwww I want another chapter :(

Loved it good job

I never thought in my life that those two fools would go that far, of course I new that the fat pig liked viktor but I dont see how viktor could stoop so low to fall for him. Im not jealous. Im mad. But... I cant hrlp but say they make a great couple. Im happy for yuri BUT DONT TELL THE FAT PIG I SAID THAT!

Aw theyre too cute, bt i gotta admit i like victor's pov better

Oh way roller coaster of feeling in this one. The ending was sweet and it was done in just the right manner for what was going on in this chapter. I so love the way you put detail into every part of this work. Thank you for posting this up.

Honestly, I liked it. I mean, sure, there is some things that don't seem quite with how they are, but that's fine. I mean, it is fanfiction after all and neither one of us owns Yuri! On Ice, despite wishing we did. So I think some differences are okay. For these two, I think you did wonderfully and I hope the bug to write things for them bites you once again for a new tale.

Man if this is what happens with one kind of review then I say your on your way to something. Flow was good but a the part about Victor before he was outside of Yuri's room seemed to have been a little jumpy. The back tone of the story seems to almost being mixing different levels in this chapter too. One moment it is high like you were over joyed to be writing it and then low like you didn't seem to know what next to do. It did make for a fun read thou this round.

Good detail and nice twist to the story. The tone (voice whatever you want to call it really) is better here then in the first chapter. Do you think you can make it stronger? (LOL)