Hahaha that was great!
It was so good and funny and filled with drunk people and I absolutely loved it!

You doubled up a section of the text, yo. That aside, if Mary still has the Queen Snake, then she and the rest of the Dan are bound to meet up again. Also, I wonder if Ayano stays behind the scenes in stuff like this...which feels likely to me, considering what I know about her involvement in the KagePro plot...

So yeah, this has been an entertaining read, yo. Keep on learning and doing your best, too, dear writer!

ah yes hibiya getting run over by a truck is muy gracioso. I mean trucks are basically the premise of the series.

I like this fic a lot! They're all in-character, and the SetoMary is adorable~! However, I suggest proofreading again- you repeated a whole paragraph!